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2019-02-09 12:06

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Immortal_Shades
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Thank you for reading my novel and the 5 star rating :) Sorry, but I only plan to release 1 chapter a day. The thing is, when I first started, I released I think 10 or 11 chapters? The next day, I released 2 chapters. However, because I was just releasing chapters just for the sake of releasing, I noticed that there were some plotholes. In fact, one reader (you know who you are *wink*) pointed a plothole. Because of that, I needed to re-edit the previous chapters to correct the plothole -- it was a nightmare! *shivers* Because of this, I decided to release 1 chapter a day only so that I could contemplate the things I've mentioned in each chapter. In fact, I already have 5 chapters prepared but I'm still reviewing them over and over again before I release them just to avoid any future plotholes. Thank you again. I hope you will read my next chapter :)

KoFu_
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I admire that you listen to your readers and take the time to edit previous chapters. Only for that I'm gonna give a try at your novel and post a review later on. I'm gonna warn you though I'm brutally honest so don't expect a lot of good things haha but at least I put recommendations at the bottom of my review.

Immortal_Shades:Thank you for reading my novel and the 5 star rating :) Sorry, but I only plan to release 1 chapter a day. The thing is, when I first started, I released I think 10 or 11 chapters? The next day, I released 2 chapters. However, because I was just releasing chapters just for the sake of releasing, I noticed that there were some plotholes. In fact, one reader (you know who you are *wink*) pointed a plothole. Because of that, I needed to re-edit the previous chapters to correct the plothole -- it was a nightmare! *shivers* Because of this, I decided to release 1 chapter a day only so that I could contemplate the things I've mentioned in each chapter. In fact, I already have 5 chapters prepared but I'm still reviewing them over and over again before I release them just to avoid any future plotholes. Thank you again. I hope you will read my next chapter :)
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