For someone uncritical, this story will pass well. But sorry when someone already has a good package in the middle, it doesn't work. This book is full of inconsistencies that allow the story to continue. I'll pass the number of coincidence whether it's lucky or just finding a friend of hers among 1 trillion people in random places. (I think it's the worst of the story by the way) Also if you make her that lucky please give a reason why she is because it's way too many times. The ranks of cultivators and weapons don't make too much sense with the heroine once she destroys everything, another she doesn't manage to put a scratch yet the latter was much weaker, no sense. As for the characters, it's going a little better even if it's not madness, that's a little improved, let's say. Despite enemies dumber than each other. Arrogant young masters who never really make sense. Hoping also that the heroine's companions will not improve ad infinitum and will follow her to the end, maybe we will find a little bit of originality here because animals are almost what matters better for once even if not exploited enough. In short passable we have seen worse but if you want to find the nugget among the novels of cultivation it is not this one.
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Considering that this is my first critical review, I'm going to respond. Yes there are inconsistencies, I'm one guy and you're reading chapters from a few years ago that hasn't been revamped. I did say cultivation/system wasn't going to be a big element, it's there to help give an idea. There are tons of other factors that can affect a fight: experience, technique, etc, not just weapons and cultivation. Your biggest peeve seems to be coincidences or basically meeting other characters, I'm not changing that. I'm going to reuse characters because I'm not going to spend time making a character that'll only appear for twenty chapters. All of these characters are recurring. The fact that you actually remember their names in your comments means that I'm getting what I want. And of course, she's not the smartest person in the story. Yes, she's naive or this or that. If she didn't make mistakes, this book would be boring and I would've dropped it years ago. And if you're looking for originality, this is a cultivation novel. There are hundreds of them on this website, originality is hard to come by. If you've read enough, nothing is original anymore.
Wow i will have to disagree with your review as i cant see the inconsistencies but there is always changes of fate that happen in these sort of novels as well as these sort of novels never fully make sence as somewhere along the line your have to apply fate to these novels as there is always a factor that does not make sence in these novels as common sence is usually thrown out the window as they view the world differently then us and there laws of physics are different as well as all the laws of the world
I can handle grammar issues…but not other stuff. Thanks for saving me time.
No worries, I recommend “New Life: A Second Chance”, a very good novel.
