Hello! I'm the author here giving myself a three because I think that there is fair deal of stuff to improve. I don't intend to get into super exaggerated descriptions like "glorious, glamorous or planet-breaking, etc". Not really of fan of that. If you enjoy the story then please leave a review, if there is any issue such as grammar or plot holes and such, leave a comment and I will try my best to fix it.
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LIKEi love your story i think it deserves more then 3 stars i would at least rate it 4,5 stars but probebly 5 stars compared to other storys on this site . as for feedback i think you could add more information about how elemental talent works after 270 chapters in i think i get how it works but i still have doubts over if im correct.
Will take it to note. The early chapters are a bit rough and will be redone later to better introduce the world mechanics. In terms of elemental talent, you could relate it to magic in a sense. You would be super proficient in one element and be able to use just that. But with something like the "Dao" where anything under the sun can be considered, it gets complicated because you could practice another "Dao" to compliment your main. It gets very open-ended which puts me in a love/hate reationship with it. The concept of "Dao" gives a sense that you could do anything but that also means that it can get very complicated.
Brammm:i love your story i think it deserves more then 3 stars i would at least rate it 4,5 stars but probebly 5 stars compared to other storys on this site . as for feedback i think you could add more information about how elemental talent works after 270 chapters in i think i get how it works but i still have doubts over if im correct.
Yeah, unfortunately if you have a female lead, literally all the genre options have romance next to it. They don't have a fantasy only option. Waiting for Webnovel to change that but it doesn't seem like it.
Hastatii:I have a question If it has a no romance tag why does it say fantasy romance in the genre??? I’m confused 🤣
Hi Argas just wondering if you will add more continents other than the current 3, possibly a island Archipelago, or a lost continent with a mixture of humans, demons, beast people, maybe an angel or celestial species or a elemental species born from different elements. I love the adventure and world building parts, where the world keeps feeling larger and larger. keep up the good work, love the book so far.
maybe :)
Joshyisboss120:Hi Argas just wondering if you will add more continents other than the current 3, possibly a island Archipelago, or a lost continent with a mixture of humans, demons, beast people, maybe an angel or celestial species or a elemental species born from different elements. I love the adventure and world building parts, where the world keeps feeling larger and larger. keep up the good work, love the book so far.