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FCentinel
FCentinelLv34yr
2020-11-04 06:36

The premise of the story is really good and the world is pretty intersting, but goddamn is the pace horrible. The story starts really strong and is quite enjoyable if a little bit frustrating, but still acceptable. This goes all down the train around ch. 150-200 and it goes downhill... fast... There happens so much shit that doesnt get resolved and when it gets resolved its pretty fast. If that wouldnt be nough before you can even enjoy the momentary victory of the MC it gets all ruined and something happens or someone appears who is just above MC in every way. So yeah if you want to see a MC who CONSTANTLY has to hide run and train for one to two chapters of victory every 100 chapters this is your story!

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Beastlyyy
BeastlyyyLv3

Why you dont have more upvotes? This is freaking true, i think it was at chapter 200+ when i stopped reading, he goes hiding and overcomes the obstacle, 1,2 chapters of relative peace , guess what another obstacle appears and he hides, and thats not all, what does the mc do? train and become stronger? No, he helps his friends because 5 ants can kill a freaking elephant that type of analogy. Thats why i dont invest my time and money in this novel.

Galaleo
GalaleoLv13

Honestly it only gets worse past chapter 400

Poisoncheaker
PoisoncheakerLv14

Absolutely true

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Strv
StrvLv13

The story starts quite causaly, yet powerfully. Unlike most novels, Daniel the MC is not really chasing for power, he has to acquire it in order to keep his home safe, his home well, his friends close. Yet calamity after calamity happens /honestly if I didn't know I would think the author purposely causes those disasters./ Here comes someone insanely creative @SometimesItalk, just when you think he's done, comes the new arc, riding on a meteorite, ruptured by the Dragon king's tail, while fighting an ancient futuristic god, then zombies, lasers, something unimaginable, how does it even make sence. Eh, it does anyway. A few genres pretty well connected. The character development is really deep and well diffused throught the chapters, you feel like you know those people, there is not that boring moment of walls of text of description of a mustache, yet you know exactly how does it look like, why the character decided to develop a mustache, and guess that he uses the same care as your uncle Thomas. The world is real, lol it is, pretty much as the characters, not being avalanched by plain text, roughly explained making clear outlines of the scene. Just let your imagination work. You will either forget those little details or submerse in there. Honestly I got past the first chapter pretty hard. What is hard. Well it took me three whole days to read a single chapter. After that I read a few chapters and really liked it. Despite it was pretty causal, it had potential, he caused it and he used it. Till I caught up I couldn't keep reading. (ATTENTION : addictive!) The writing got much better, yet it had some gaps and flaws, sometimes misunderstanding, hell which novel here doesn't, it isn't a professional thing. The novel has the potential to reach the End and forth. @Webnovel itself should assign a good editor and eventually bring this story further. Well it's not close to done yet. (I hole so!) So let's not put the carriage in front of the hobbit. So in one word, again: Addictive, pretty well written with a lot of passion for the novel itself and the readers. Well this is the best thing here yet not many of the authors use the opportunity to communicate with the readers. Edit: It is not paid. 😅😂 For sure if you like novels like this, if you don't, if you don't care /surely I don't care cuz it doesn't matter/.. • • • • • • • • • • • • GIVE IT A TRY! • • • • • • • • • • • •

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