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CocoaButter
CocoaButterLv115yr
2019-03-08 06:28

I get the MC is young and easy subject to manipulate due to his *****ty but oh god this is too much. And who lets their younger sibling np matter the gender protect them and work hard just for them to go to school? The sister is useless and the MC has no potential whatsoever besides the gift that was bestowed to him due to his kindness. I cannot stand honest ***** MCS anymore. I am sick of it. It puts the whole story development down.

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SometimesITalk
SometimesITalkAuthor

Surprise surprise, things aren't going easy for the MC in the beginning of the story. Let's ignore any form of maturity that a 14 yo should have, and assume that the main character will never change for rest of the 1.5 million words long story. These are the reviews that I like, really.

CocoaButter
CocoaButterLv11

Surprise surprise not everybody likes a story similar to this. A main character that doesn't think about how he got this power randomly. Also, the repetition of how his parents died is boring. The sister is already his huge weakness and useless. I don't like novels where luck is the main factor. Continue reading this. I didn't know the word n a i v e t y was censored. Interesting. Good luck reading this predictable novel.

SometimesITalk:Surprise surprise, things aren't going easy for the MC in the beginning of the story. Let's ignore any form of maturity that a 14 yo should have, and assume that the main character will never change for rest of the 1.5 million words long story. These are the reviews that I like, really.
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

I just don't understand how people can crap their pans so fast that they can't even make it to the toilet. Let a lone so hard that they blow a hole out the seat of their pants too. These people seem to read less than 20 chapters let alone 50-70 and think they know everything about the book and know every way it is going to be flawed and wrong in every way possible. I could understand coming to a quick conclusion if the writing style it's self was bad. But, this has nothing to do with writing styles. It is funny because these same people are the some ones who go and read the LNs that are all of random stuff going on for who knows what reason and full of sit-com comedy that it is beyond sickening.

Hydrosphere
HydrosphereLv5

Wow i always see you whenever the author replied on hate comments, keep sucking his dck to get some good **** huh lmao

SorcererCat:I just don't understand how people can crap their pans so fast that they can't even make it to the toilet. Let a lone so hard that they blow a hole out the seat of their pants too. These people seem to read less than 20 chapters let alone 50-70 and think they know everything about the book and know every way it is going to be flawed and wrong in every way possible. I could understand coming to a quick conclusion if the writing style it's self was bad. But, this has nothing to do with writing styles. It is funny because these same people are the some ones who go and read the LNs that are all of random stuff going on for who knows what reason and full of sit-com comedy that it is beyond sickening.
Hydrosphere
HydrosphereLv5

Wow i always see you whenever the author replied on hate comments, keep sucking his dck to get some good **** huh lmao

SorcererCat:I just don't understand how people can crap their pans so fast that they can't even make it to the toilet. Let a lone so hard that they blow a hole out the seat of their pants too. These people seem to read less than 20 chapters let alone 50-70 and think they know everything about the book and know every way it is going to be flawed and wrong in every way possible. I could understand coming to a quick conclusion if the writing style it's self was bad. But, this has nothing to do with writing styles. It is funny because these same people are the some ones who go and read the LNs that are all of random stuff going on for who knows what reason and full of sit-com comedy that it is beyond sickening.
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

It seems you have some fantasies there. My statement is no less true now than when I stated it. OP only read a quick 6 chapters and crapped their pants in 3 seconds flat.

Hydrosphere:Wow i always see you whenever the author replied on hate comments, keep sucking his dck to get some good **** huh lmao
Gacha123
Gacha123Lv4

ok fanboy

SorcererCat:It seems you have some fantasies there. My statement is no less true now than when I stated it. OP only read a quick 6 chapters and crapped their pants in 3 seconds flat.
hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

Oh no i read ln , guess i dont have taste

SorcererCat:I just don't understand how people can crap their pans so fast that they can't even make it to the toilet. Let a lone so hard that they blow a hole out the seat of their pants too. These people seem to read less than 20 chapters let alone 50-70 and think they know everything about the book and know every way it is going to be flawed and wrong in every way possible. I could understand coming to a quick conclusion if the writing style it's self was bad. But, this has nothing to do with writing styles. It is funny because these same people are the some ones who go and read the LNs that are all of random stuff going on for who knows what reason and full of sit-com comedy that it is beyond sickening.
hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

20 ch is a couple of days worth of investment if ur readinf it live and a lot of text for a casual reader, why cant u judge a book based on 20 chs worth of text? Why dont u try to understand why ppl think the way they do instead of hating?

SorcererCat:I just don't understand how people can crap their pans so fast that they can't even make it to the toilet. Let a lone so hard that they blow a hole out the seat of their pants too. These people seem to read less than 20 chapters let alone 50-70 and think they know everything about the book and know every way it is going to be flawed and wrong in every way possible. I could understand coming to a quick conclusion if the writing style it's self was bad. But, this has nothing to do with writing styles. It is funny because these same people are the some ones who go and read the LNs that are all of random stuff going on for who knows what reason and full of sit-com comedy that it is beyond sickening.
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

for one he only read 6 chapters not 20. On top of that back then the author was writing 2 chapters a day and had many chapters out in their LN when this person made their commit.

hung_up_my_coat:20 ch is a couple of days worth of investment if ur readinf it live and a lot of text for a casual reader, why cant u judge a book based on 20 chs worth of text? Why dont u try to understand why ppl think the way they do instead of hating?
LustDemon
LustDemonLv1

i was going to say the same bro... he is sucking author's d in evey hate comment lol...

Hydrosphere:Wow i always see you whenever the author replied on hate comments, keep sucking his dck to get some good **** huh lmao
LustDemon
LustDemonLv1

dude, let them solve their matters themselves. i get it that you are a ******** fanboy of this author but that doesn't mean you will trash reply every low star (hate) comments. i have seen you trashing evey low star comments on this novel and i dont get why it is affecting you more than it does the author. if the author is not replying, why are you replying in his stead? leave it be.. it will not kill you🤦‍♂️

SorcererCat:for one he only read 6 chapters not 20. On top of that back then the author was writing 2 chapters a day and had many chapters out in their LN when this person made their commit.
Sparkwhy
SparkwhyLv13

As always on webnovel, good novels end up receiving bad reviews while poorly written novels get positive reviews which then gets them promoted more allowing them to later become one of the top novels. When you see a low star 'hate' review that tries to disguise itself as criticism by using a piece of information from the story stripped of it's context and framed in a negative light- people who enjoy the series will see it for what it is but those who have only just discovered the series will scroll through and interpret it to be the genuine thoughts of the readers. So replying to these reviews in order to disprove them can counteract the senseless hate and show the potential new readers what's really going on.

LustDemon:dude, let them solve their matters themselves. i get it that you are a ******** fanboy of this author but that doesn't mean you will trash reply every low star (hate) comments. i have seen you trashing evey low star comments on this novel and i dont get why it is affecting you more than it does the author. if the author is not replying, why are you replying in his stead? leave it be.. it will not kill you🤦‍♂️
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Strv
StrvLv13

The story starts quite causaly, yet powerfully. Unlike most novels, Daniel the MC is not really chasing for power, he has to acquire it in order to keep his home safe, his home well, his friends close. Yet calamity after calamity happens /honestly if I didn't know I would think the author purposely causes those disasters./ Here comes someone insanely creative @SometimesItalk, just when you think he's done, comes the new arc, riding on a meteorite, ruptured by the Dragon king's tail, while fighting an ancient futuristic god, then zombies, lasers, something unimaginable, how does it even make sence. Eh, it does anyway. A few genres pretty well connected. The character development is really deep and well diffused throught the chapters, you feel like you know those people, there is not that boring moment of walls of text of description of a mustache, yet you know exactly how does it look like, why the character decided to develop a mustache, and guess that he uses the same care as your uncle Thomas. The world is real, lol it is, pretty much as the characters, not being avalanched by plain text, roughly explained making clear outlines of the scene. Just let your imagination work. You will either forget those little details or submerse in there. Honestly I got past the first chapter pretty hard. What is hard. Well it took me three whole days to read a single chapter. After that I read a few chapters and really liked it. Despite it was pretty causal, it had potential, he caused it and he used it. Till I caught up I couldn't keep reading. (ATTENTION : addictive!) The writing got much better, yet it had some gaps and flaws, sometimes misunderstanding, hell which novel here doesn't, it isn't a professional thing. The novel has the potential to reach the End and forth. @Webnovel itself should assign a good editor and eventually bring this story further. Well it's not close to done yet. (I hole so!) So let's not put the carriage in front of the hobbit. So in one word, again: Addictive, pretty well written with a lot of passion for the novel itself and the readers. Well this is the best thing here yet not many of the authors use the opportunity to communicate with the readers. Edit: It is not paid. 😅😂 For sure if you like novels like this, if you don't, if you don't care /surely I don't care cuz it doesn't matter/.. • • • • • • • • • • • • GIVE IT A TRY! • • • • • • • • • • • •

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