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Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv46yr
2018-12-28 23:12

While the writing quality isn't absolute trash, it is quite close to it, there are tons of grammatical errors and ****. ( You'll see them once you start reading. ) As for the characters.... They Are Fucking Autistic. I can't hate them more, they got the IQ of a tomato (probably also share the amount of chromosomes) its actually insane. Overall not recommended

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SometimesITalk
SometimesITalkAuthor

Thanks for your in dept review. I guess that your deep hatred for the three characters presented in the very chapter you've dropped the novel in must have eaten you alive..

Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv4

Did I ask for your opinion?

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

crapped their pants over it instead of reading a bit more to see how it all turns out. The characters did not turn out bad at all. Your talking about a few beginning characters that you never see again after the first 30 chapters. They were just filler characters. I mean you can't say the MC is going to school and have no one else at the school can you? The character didn't end up going to school for long and ended up someplace else. So, why would the author make them anything more than a filler/passing-by character? I guess this is what you get when you crap your pants before you make it to the bathroom and sit on the toilet properly.

Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv4

Are you butthurt or something, cause I honestly dont give a ****

ramennoodlez
ramennoodlezLv3

yes, yes you did. You did exactly that by making a review of a product. Wow how odd, the creator of a product responded to your review of his product. how horrible.

Huuurtme:Did I ask for your opinion?
ramennoodlez
ramennoodlezLv3

seems like you do if you made a reply.

Huuurtme:Are you butthurt or something, cause I honestly dont give a ****
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