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Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv45yr
2018-12-28 23:12

While the writing quality isn't absolute trash, it is quite close to it, there are tons of grammatical errors and ****. ( You'll see them once you start reading. ) As for the characters.... They Are Fucking Autistic. I can't hate them more, they got the IQ of a tomato (probably also share the amount of chromosomes) its actually insane. Overall not recommended

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SometimesITalk
SometimesITalkAuthor

Thanks for your in dept review. I guess that your deep hatred for the three characters presented in the very chapter you've dropped the novel in must have eaten you alive..

Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv4

Did I ask for your opinion?

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

crapped their pants over it instead of reading a bit more to see how it all turns out. The characters did not turn out bad at all. Your talking about a few beginning characters that you never see again after the first 30 chapters. They were just filler characters. I mean you can't say the MC is going to school and have no one else at the school can you? The character didn't end up going to school for long and ended up someplace else. So, why would the author make them anything more than a filler/passing-by character? I guess this is what you get when you crap your pants before you make it to the bathroom and sit on the toilet properly.

Huuurtme
HuuurtmeLv4

Are you butthurt or something, cause I honestly dont give a ****

ramennoodlez
ramennoodlezLv3

yes, yes you did. You did exactly that by making a review of a product. Wow how odd, the creator of a product responded to your review of his product. how horrible.

Huuurtme:Did I ask for your opinion?
ramennoodlez
ramennoodlezLv3

seems like you do if you made a reply.

Huuurtme:Are you butthurt or something, cause I honestly dont give a ****
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The story starts quite causaly, yet powerfully. Unlike most novels, Daniel the MC is not really chasing for power, he has to acquire it in order to keep his home safe, his home well, his friends close. Yet calamity after calamity happens /honestly if I didn't know I would think the author purposely causes those disasters./ Here comes someone insanely creative @SometimesItalk, just when you think he's done, comes the new arc, riding on a meteorite, ruptured by the Dragon king's tail, while fighting an ancient futuristic god, then zombies, lasers, something unimaginable, how does it even make sence. Eh, it does anyway. A few genres pretty well connected. The character development is really deep and well diffused throught the chapters, you feel like you know those people, there is not that boring moment of walls of text of description of a mustache, yet you know exactly how does it look like, why the character decided to develop a mustache, and guess that he uses the same care as your uncle Thomas. The world is real, lol it is, pretty much as the characters, not being avalanched by plain text, roughly explained making clear outlines of the scene. Just let your imagination work. You will either forget those little details or submerse in there. Honestly I got past the first chapter pretty hard. What is hard. Well it took me three whole days to read a single chapter. After that I read a few chapters and really liked it. Despite it was pretty causal, it had potential, he caused it and he used it. Till I caught up I couldn't keep reading. (ATTENTION : addictive!) The writing got much better, yet it had some gaps and flaws, sometimes misunderstanding, hell which novel here doesn't, it isn't a professional thing. The novel has the potential to reach the End and forth. @Webnovel itself should assign a good editor and eventually bring this story further. Well it's not close to done yet. (I hole so!) So let's not put the carriage in front of the hobbit. So in one word, again: Addictive, pretty well written with a lot of passion for the novel itself and the readers. Well this is the best thing here yet not many of the authors use the opportunity to communicate with the readers. Edit: It is not paid. 😅😂 For sure if you like novels like this, if you don't, if you don't care /surely I don't care cuz it doesn't matter/.. • • • • • • • • • • • • GIVE IT A TRY! • • • • • • • • • • • •

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