This was a good time-passer until latest chapter. Plot twist! Turns out our transmigrated MC was a natural born supreme being after all, just like Shi Hao from Perfect World. He also got his bloodline/body parts stolen from him by evil relatives, no doubt to give to their own child, just like Shi Hao. No thanks, the original is enough. Your MC just ain't funny enough to carry the story by himself. Adding this sheet into the plot just means more unnecessary content.
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LIKEAlthough I've never read Perfect World, since I'm not really a big fan of Xianxia novels. I just wanted to give MC's predecessor a tragic past. Of course this novel is a fan fiction, so the mc won't be stuck in that world forever, since he will go to different worlds. Thanks for writing the review. I don't mind the criticism.
if did think of it on your own that great and all but, most readers might look at as a copy and paste from perfect world mc tragic past. for me still like the story the tragic past which was similar to perfect didn't matter. I just didn't like the tragic past in general. Keep the great work and i love the increase of update frequency
What's weird is everything seems predestined, like he's just a remnant soul who runs according to script. His reincarnation wishes was already set. Granted in the foreign world which his predecessor seems to be pure human until the system kick in and all of a sudden, there's a whole heritage thing made for him. Even the other abilities in that world have a origin.