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Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor6yr
2018-09-06 13:19

Thanks for the reviews. I hope the readers can point out the mistakes I'm making so that I can try to improve the novel. I'll try to improve the rate of updates if possible. Please support me.

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swordzero
swordzeroLv6

Author your doing an amazing job even if you update every day novel is great and, as i pay more attention to the plot than the grammer. As they say quality over quantity

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

Chainman
ChainmanLv4

Is there romance??harem??

Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor

It has harem . Only later in the novel. As for opness. He is op when he gets back his system. And he has a special physique called 'Black Body' which can infinitely absorb any kind of energy and strengthen his body endlessly. Of course, this physique will be revealed later in the plot. And with his Devouring Force, you could say mc is op. But he just doesn't realize it.

swordzero
swordzeroLv6

Try not to make the harem so big that we forget some of the characters and don't rush the interaction between the mc and the harem when they are in the harem. Just take it nice at your own pace. thanks, keep it up :)

Arkszero:It has harem . Only later in the novel. As for opness. He is op when he gets back his system. And he has a special physique called 'Black Body' which can infinitely absorb any kind of energy and strengthen his body endlessly. Of course, this physique will be revealed later in the plot. And with his Devouring Force, you could say mc is op. But he just doesn't realize it.
Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor

Well, considering MC's character, the harem wouldn't increase too fast, maybe even slow.

swordzero:Try not to make the harem so big that we forget some of the characters and don't rush the interaction between the mc and the harem when they are in the harem. Just take it nice at your own pace. thanks, keep it up :)
yourname128
yourname128Lv5

Ehm... Netorare? Wtf

Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor

It's not neto rare!! Some prick just put it there. Seriously even those spams.. Sigh.. I really don't understand why that guy is targeting this novel so much.

yourname128:Ehm... Netorare? Wtf
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11

~^_^~ because your novel is good and he is just jealous that others are enjoying your work and he is not.. anyway i want more chapters hehehehe its like a drug no amount is enough

Arkszero:It's not neto rare!! Some prick just put it there. Seriously even those spams.. Sigh.. I really don't understand why that guy is targeting this novel so much.
Aagnus
AagnusLv14

So no netorare? I wanna try reading this but I'm hesitating because of netorare. And righteous because for me they are hypocrite.... And *****.... Well I guess I'll try reading this then

Hijack02
Hijack02Lv13

Hahaha, I was hesitating to read this because of the netorare tag. Glad to know it isn't 😂

Arkszero:It's not neto rare!! Some prick just put it there. Seriously even those spams.. Sigh.. I really don't understand why that guy is targeting this novel so much.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Me too when I see the netorare tag I wasn't in the mood to read the novel until you clear it up

CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

I was going to read till I saw naratere ntr so ya douse this really have ntr. I’ll read it if it has a harem and No ntr

Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor

No NTR! Someone just played pranks and put up those fake tags. And there is harem.

CliffkunLolRekt:I was going to read till I saw naratere ntr so ya douse this really have ntr. I’ll read it if it has a harem and No ntr
TheImmortal
TheImmortalLv5

Tell me one thing will this novel have a huge harem or not Also how can you call him a harem seeking protagonist when clearly he is not seeking anything and usually it is the system giving him those quests

Arkszero
ArkszeroAuthor

By huge, I don't know how huge you mean. But it will have a big harem. You know how things goes in the cultivation worlds. If you want anything, you need to have the strength. Besides MC's willingness to have a huge harem can be considered harem)seeking? I think. Well, anyway... He's still in the lower realms. There are still a few realms out there. So he will have his fair share of chasing around women.

TheImmortal:Tell me one thing will this novel have a huge harem or not Also how can you call him a harem seeking protagonist when clearly he is not seeking anything and usually it is the system giving him those quests
SoberanoSinNombre
SoberanoSinNombreLv5

Soooo No netorare?

Arkszero:It's not neto rare!! Some prick just put it there. Seriously even those spams.. Sigh.. I really don't understand why that guy is targeting this novel so much.
BlankV
BlankVLv14

Man where's this novels chapter

BlankV
BlankVLv14

Man where's this novels chapter

SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv14

arkszero I hope you continue writing than rewrite because to me is so fantastic and good novel and good language.

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