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Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor6yr
2018-09-04 08:56

Shameless advertisement ahead... You'll probably end up not knowing anything from reading the synopsis and that is because I haven't thought up the plot yet. I am just writing as it goes. In any case, while this is a romance, the emphasis will be on familial and relationship drama. And since someone asked, no, it is not Yuri. It is the chronicle of two women's lives with drastic personality and the way their lives intertwine. After translating two romance webnovels, I've inadvertently absorbed some of their writing style so expect plenty of tropes, but with a twist. As you can see from the short synopsis, there will be plenty of drama because that is my goal, to be the maestro of forced drama on webnovel.com.

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swati_tank
swati_tankLv5

Thanks

shadoX
shadoXLv5

How do you have time to do all this?

Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor

That's the question I ask myself daily

shadoX:How do you have time to do all this?
shadoX
shadoXLv5

Lol

Lonelytree:That's the question I ask myself daily
shadoX
shadoXLv5

Do you make a lot of money at least

Lonelytree:That's the question I ask myself daily
Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor

I don't make anything from this. Only the translation.

shadoX:Do you make a lot of money at least
shadoX
shadoXLv5

I know, I mean from the translation

Lonelytree:I don't make anything from this. Only the translation.
Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor

Not as much as you would think. Just slightly above average.

shadoX:I know, I mean from the translation
shadoX
shadoXLv5

That sucks

Lonelytree:Not as much as you would think. Just slightly above average.
ExtraTarka
ExtraTarkaLv5

You deserve more for your hard work!

AiHikari
AiHikariLv14

I saw this when you promote it on your translator note. So here we go (σ*▽*)σ

FengQiu
FengQiuLv14

I like your 2 translations so here my vote for you (*'▽'*)♪

Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor

<3

FengQiu:I like your 2 translations so here my vote for you (*'▽'*)♪
_Yura_
_Yura_Lv5

what are the stories you translated? ah, sorry if that sounded bad...!?? I was taken by the title of your original actually, and when I checked this review, it's mentioned that you translate stories... I am just curious... though I feel like I've encountered your name on a story I'm reading already... hmm 🤔

Lonelytree
LonelytreeAuthor

I translate Age of Cosmic Exploration, Mr. CEO Spoil me 100 Percent, Living with Temperamental Adonis: 99 Proclamation of Love and the upcoming Release that Man.

_Yura_:what are the stories you translated? ah, sorry if that sounded bad...!?? I was taken by the title of your original actually, and when I checked this review, it's mentioned that you translate stories... I am just curious... though I feel like I've encountered your name on a story I'm reading already... hmm 🤔
_Yura_
_Yura_Lv5

wow, that's a lot. and you even have an original story. your amazing. 😊

Lonelytree:I translate Age of Cosmic Exploration, Mr. CEO Spoil me 100 Percent, Living with Temperamental Adonis: 99 Proclamation of Love and the upcoming Release that Man.
bigsong
bigsongLv3

fighting!!!

Silkscreen
SilkscreenLv11

"Shameless advertisement"... Hahaha! Good one. Okay, let me read it and if I feel motivated I'll try writing a melodrama, too.

sleepingbeauty
sleepingbeautyLv3

Nice

sylab
sylabLv4

Your words alone makes the thrill

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Elude
EludeLv10

I'm glad I got past the very first sentence in your novel, my face turned cold after reading a pretty interesting mistake-free synopsis only to see a mistake in the first piece of dialogue. (I think the first piece of dialogue in your CH1 will sound more fluent if rewritten to, "... or will there be others who are going to join you?") However, overall, this is the best original novel in terms of grammar/flow that I've reviewed recently, really good job! The main cast is also very thoroughly described to the point that I can get a rather clear picture of how they look whilst reading - *this includes even the clothes their wearing!*, +1. Others may not like this type of story-telling, but I really enjoyed it. Also, the supporting characters in your novel are both perceptive and not overly stupid which I too enjoy. The only con I would really say is the general story and goal doesn't truly interest me *personally*, as I have my own interests and likes that don't fall under the 'realistic fiction' genre, but that's not a problem since your intended audience is not to people such as myself. (This is also a bit biased since I only read 20 or so chapters, there may very well of been future plots which would have greatly interested me in the coming chapters.) Overall, if you're looking for a good original read with a *female protagonist* and a good touch of *realism* this is a good thing to start with. 4.4/5 If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)

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