Writing quality has seriously gone downhill. Ever since the author has added more fanfictions and books on this site the release schedule has been abysmal at 1 chapter perday. Every chapter is just fluff where nothing important happens. Kalan's reduced to a measly side character who's trying to maintain the original story, but the story has already deviated too far from the original to the point where his efforts are futile. I wasn't on board the Bulma train from the get go and reccomended multiple times that he didn't romance Bulma. I don't know why Toga even paired Kalan and Bulma together in the first place if he was just going to Yamcha him. Bulma's excuse for not being together with him is because he trains to much? Lol wait till she finds out how much Vegeta trains, adding on that Vegeta can't make clones of himself. Chapter 130 is my dropping point. It felt like a big FU to my face. An entire chapter dedicated to eating food. It seems like the author is losing interest and this is going to be dropped. I'll revisit on the future to see if his writing has improved, but as of now my review stands. Haowie out!
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LIKEI just think he needs to improve his writing and figure out where he wants to go with this. If i wanted to follow Goku throughout his adventures I'd rewatch DBZ. Kalan didn't need to start a dojo, he didn't need to attack Freiza, and he didn't need to start training everyone if he really wanted to preserve the timeline. He should've just got Broly's Bloodline and moved on. Maybe start an adventure elsewhere like universe 6 or something then meet up with Goku once he reaches the Freiza arc.
Gingnami:What a waste of my time. Chapter 130 probally triggered his entire readerbase.