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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv46yr
2018-09-06 13:12

The best. Everything is perfect. This is THE BEST dragon ball fanfic. . Please don't drop this. And don't rush the story, like many other fanfics. Keep up the good work.

The Strongest System in Dragon Ball World

Toga
4.1
131 Chs

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mitre
mitreLv5

Honestly every other incarnate into dbz universe story gets dropped eventually and those that don't have a weak storyline and bad grammar not that it's hard to read I lost faith in these stories I hope this one is different

6yr
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Baqir123
Baqir123Lv4

True

mitre:Honestly every other incarnate into dbz universe story gets dropped eventually and those that don't have a weak storyline and bad grammar not that it's hard to read I lost faith in these stories I hope this one is different
6yr
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

I like this as well but I think that the strongest legend of dragon ball novel is pretty good as well

6yr
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Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13

Their is good foundation to this story please keep writing 10000%support👍

6yr
misterbro
misterbroLv5

nah that story is trash, the chinese fool who makes it introduces all kinds of outlandish explanations for everything in the dragon ball universe to try to introduce the chinese "balance" which completely destroys the magic of dragon ball... making sensu beans have negative side effects, making saiyans not able to get stronger infinitly by going through life or death battles by saying you need to train on your own for a few years between suffering injuries before your saiyan body will power up.... all kinds of bull****, dude tried to introduce cons to all pros... and in a fukin magical world like dragon ball which isn't supposed to make sense... takes all the magic outa the world.

InnerVoice:I like this as well but I think that the strongest legend of dragon ball novel is pretty good as well
6yr
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InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

See but that’s why I love it, cause it give a form of logic into the story

misterbro:nah that story is trash, the chinese fool who makes it introduces all kinds of outlandish explanations for everything in the dragon ball universe to try to introduce the chinese "balance" which completely destroys the magic of dragon ball... making sensu beans have negative side effects, making saiyans not able to get stronger infinitly by going through life or death battles by saying you need to train on your own for a few years between suffering injuries before your saiyan body will power up.... all kinds of bull****, dude tried to introduce cons to all pros... and in a fukin magical world like dragon ball which isn't supposed to make sense... takes all the magic outa the world.
6yr
misterbro
misterbroLv5

no adding a downside to every upside trying to rationalize an alternate universe where everything is supposed to be possible is completely counter-intuitive

InnerVoice:See but that’s why I love it, cause it give a form of logic into the story
6yr
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InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

Dude without this little bit of logic, literally everyone could just grow at an insane speed and surpass the king of all in an instant. Do you really think that would be an interesting story? If so you my friend are wack in the head

misterbro:no adding a downside to every upside trying to rationalize an alternate universe where everything is supposed to be possible is completely counter-intuitive
6yr
misterbro
misterbroLv5

no, trying to make everything make sense in an alternate world removes all mystery, magic, and wonder from the world. theres a reason dragon ball and dragon ball z are super popular in the west, thats because unlike easterners who want stories that make perfect fuckin sense and have an explenation for everything, us westerners like the magic and mystery to STAY magic and mystery.... don't fucking ruin it with eastern bull**** balance while trying to break down and explain literally fucking everything in the universe to utterly destroy all magic in the story.

InnerVoice:Dude without this little bit of logic, literally everyone could just grow at an insane speed and surpass the king of all in an instant. Do you really think that would be an interesting story? If so you my friend are wack in the head
6yr
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misterbro
misterbroLv5

real dragon ball fans would hate that fuckin fanfic.

InnerVoice:Dude without this little bit of logic, literally everyone could just grow at an insane speed and surpass the king of all in an instant. Do you really think that would be an interesting story? If so you my friend are wack in the head
6yr
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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

I am a real dragon ball fan and although I don't hate 'strongest legend of dragon ball', but it's not as good as it could be. And let me tell you. I like Chinese novels.

6yr
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

Yet here you are, reading a fanfic

misterbro:real dragon ball fans would hate that fuckin fanfic.
6yr
mitre
mitreLv5

Lol y'all wild I personally feel the worst thig about the system stories is the system itself this one right here is bad, author try reading skyrim Dragonborne see how the author uses the system he rarely does the beep thing everytime is extremely irritating and give it a personality please make it like a symbiote

6yr
Tiktark
TiktarkLv14

Im curious if the author will mention beerus/zeno or the alternate universes

6yr
misterbro
misterbroLv5

you know i wasn't talking about all fanfics or this one so don't try to be sly and paint white as black just because you have no retort... just admit defeat honestly and openly... don't try to twist my words around to make me seem like im dissing all fanfics.

InnerVoice:Yet here you are, reading a fanfic
6yr
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InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

K

misterbro:you know i wasn't talking about all fanfics or this one so don't try to be sly and paint white as black just because you have no retort... just admit defeat honestly and openly... don't try to twist my words around to make me seem like im dissing all fanfics.
6yr
meFOOL
meFOOLLv7

If I were to state my opinion, Logically, using logic (of us here eath now) for other universes is completely illogical. We have our own logic and they have their own logic. So "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Just make sure to follow consistently of own's logic in own's place.

6yr
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DhruvMeena
DhruvMeenaLv5

I think the strongest legend of dragon ball is better

6yr
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Masterwookong979
Masterwookong979Lv3

Do you hate tfs dbz to

misterbro:real dragon ball fans would hate that fuckin fanfic.
6yr
Masterwookong979
Masterwookong979Lv3

Don't worry anti it "it is all for the plot😉😉" logic

mitre:Lol y'all wild I personally feel the worst thig about the system stories is the system itself this one right here is bad, author try reading skyrim Dragonborne see how the author uses the system he rarely does the beep thing everytime is extremely irritating and give it a personality please make it like a symbiote
6yr
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Hawkkkkkkkkkk
HawkkkkkkkkkkLv10

This is... Bad. There's absolutely no actual story to this. All the relationships are superficial. The characters are plain... Trash. The interactions are incredibly unrealistic. The writing and grammar are terrible. Judge for yourself, just keep in mind that there's a reason that all the good reviews read like incoherent ramblings.

6yr

StarInTheNight
StarInTheNightLv5

Fcking he is human in earth and don't know anything about love?ARE FKING THINGKING WE ARE IDIOT TO BELIVE HE IS FKING DENSE BECAUSE HE IS SAIYAN?just because u want trunkz to born?lol this is kalan story not FKING Goku and Vegeta story please be more smart... FKING i bet u love your lover be NTR before

6yr
Bakar
BakarLv6

Just Love it . Keep it up😍 Gkdhdhdydtotzyoreyeydirqtistdyxyfy9d9z5885s8z855e59e96e5idyodoyd5id8z8tt9eyoodpfyodoydyspfufupdotdtzitzitzi5Gkdhdyeyd yodtodtiz58ztidodoye69eyod

6yr
D_Jormungand
D_JormungandLv14

I like this story very much. There is nor many dragonball fanfiction in the first place. Make sure to make this one as good as or better than "the strongest legend of dragonball" That story is all good from the start with only a bad part at the end when there are another multiverse story included. Thus, make sure you do better than them. I will be cheering. And please don't be like some fanfiction that you just dropped it halfway and give the reason like wanting to train the writing. Anyway, thank you for the good story.

6yr
Haowie
HaowieLv13

Writing quality has seriously gone downhill. Ever since the author has added more fanfictions and books on this site the release schedule has been abysmal at 1 chapter perday. Every chapter is just fluff where nothing important happens. Kalan's reduced to a measly side character who's trying to maintain the original story, but the story has already deviated too far from the original to the point where his efforts are futile. I wasn't on board the Bulma train from the get go and reccomended multiple times that he didn't romance Bulma. I don't know why Toga even paired Kalan and Bulma together in the first place if he was just going to Yamcha him. Bulma's excuse for not being together with him is because he trains to much? Lol wait till she finds out how much Vegeta trains, adding on that Vegeta can't make clones of himself. Chapter 130 is my dropping point. It felt like a big FU to my face. An entire chapter dedicated to eating food. It seems like the author is losing interest and this is going to be dropped. I'll revisit on the future to see if his writing has improved, but as of now my review stands. Haowie out!

6yr
GreRREg
GreRREgLv4

Very good keep going when will take Brolys blood that's the question I have in my mind. Will Kalan someday have God Ki maybe learning and mastering Ultra Instinct would be cool or something similar

6yr
TempestWolf1013
TempestWolf1013Lv15

Good just Keep it up and keep the stable updates For the 140 word count - fxuxfixfuxufxigg jgixgxifxitsiusrrsuuraaruhRrajrfssgkgzgxkogcdhdksgurgxxkgxogxxyxtditdraqwwetyyuiooppllkjhggfddsazzzxxccvvbnmmmknjj

6yr
Shadowles_Immortal
Shadowles_ImmortalLv14

This one of the best dbz fanfic I've read so far. keep up the good story. Hopefully this doesn't somehow up with mc teleporting to say the walking dead with zero power. But yea good story n developments also great update times. This time of story deserves my ss. 😁👍👍🤓

6yr
Feudal_Lord
Feudal_LordLv4

I QUIT. Wtf man? Everyone wants bulma and kalan but they broke srsly when it drop from 2 chapters everyday to 1-2 chapters everyday i still didn't comment anything about it but kalan and bulma should be together. Kalan even wish eternal youth for bulma whats the use of that now? Your novel is getting good to bad bad to worst it sucks. Just get kalan apologize to bulma and get them back together. This chapter sucks.

6yr
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