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SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor6yr
2018-08-26 05:02

Hey all. Author here. I'm giving myself 5 stars because this is clearly the greatest story ever written. That's my completely unbiased objective opinion. You can trust me, I'm an author! As of now I have 2 chapters out. I originally only planned on writing 1 for the fun writing prompt, but since I got positive feedback I think I'll stick with it for a while. I've never written a story before so this is a fun new experience for me. Anyways, anyone who reads please leave feedback (positive or negative). That's what inspires me to keep writing. Thanks!

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HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir, it will be great is he us

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor

In the beginning not at all. He is literally the weakest person in the world. He'll be OP later in the novel, but not anytime soon. If you like comedy though then you might enjoy it anyways.

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir, it will be great is he us
dragonfang1917
dragonfang1917Lv12

The correct sating is the clothes make the man, not the suit makes the man. Just pointing it out.

Book_worm_Daoist
Book_worm_DaoistLv5

Pls don't drop this novel haha

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor

That's a saying as well. However, there is also a saying "The uniform make the man". There's also a saying "The uniform doesn't make the man, the man makes the uniform". There are several variations of this saying that use the term clothes, suit, etc. instead. I might have used the term clothes instead but the original writing prompt was for uniforms haha.

dragonfang1917:The correct sating is the clothes make the man, not the suit makes the man. Just pointing it out.
SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor

I have no plans to drop it =).

Book_worm_Daoist:Pls don't drop this novel haha
dragonfang1917
dragonfang1917Lv12

ok

SnoozySloth:That's a saying as well. However, there is also a saying "The uniform make the man". There's also a saying "The uniform doesn't make the man, the man makes the uniform". There are several variations of this saying that use the term clothes, suit, etc. instead. I might have used the term clothes instead but the original writing prompt was for uniforms haha.
ExtremePrejudice
ExtremePrejudiceLv6

so . im here just to clarify something before i read. does the MC get OP or is he just keep bluffing or scamming that hes strong ?

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor

I plan on making him OP eventually. There will be times where I also make him bluff his way through things though.

ExtremePrejudice:so . im here just to clarify something before i read. does the MC get OP or is he just keep bluffing or scamming that hes strong ?
SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothAuthor

To further clarify. In the 15 currently existing chapters he is not OP at all. He's very weak.

ExtremePrejudice:so . im here just to clarify something before i read. does the MC get OP or is he just keep bluffing or scamming that hes strong ?
ExtremePrejudice
ExtremePrejudiceLv6

oh thanks. make him OP in the upcoming chapters. but not that OP. dont go too fast in making him OP . lets ride the waves. slowly but surely. . ill bookmark this . i want to read this like 50+ chapters. :) good luck with the novel btw.

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

I see, thank you for your attention

SnoozySloth:In the beginning not at all. He is literally the weakest person in the world. He'll be OP later in the novel, but not anytime soon. If you like comedy though then you might enjoy it anyways.
DonHit
DonHitLv6

Mute

Polar_blue
Polar_blueLv14

Its been quite awhile since the last chapter, any thoughts on a new one?

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Skully_
Skully_Lv13

**Burtal Mode Engaged** at sadistic Authors request "*squeak squeak* A series of squeaking sounds echoed in a brightly lit hallway. The hallway was made up of white tiles and walls. " . WTF the hallway has walls? Who wudda thunk it? And whats with sounds in asterisks? Can't you just write "a series of squeaking" oh wait you did. This was a good start to a trash novel which was terribly ruined as outlined below. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- This story is a poor attempt at a trash novel. It tries, it really does. The info-dumping is subpar it needs way more walls of text telling the reader what is happening, there is far too much showing. The descriptors are not up to the standards of a trash novel. The MC acts logically even when pulling off a comedic outlook of being transported to another world with a system. This brings us to originality **Originality** - 0/5 of **** me a system novel. Wait. Uniforms which disguise the MC from “catch me if you can”. Hmm, despite being used in two Mangas as a superpower that has to lift it off 0/5 doesn’t it? Nah ****it. 0/5. **Story** - 5/5 this is where the author fucks it right up. They had the opportunity to be a trash novel but the story is too engaging. To qualify as webnovel contracted trash your MC needs to be inconsisten and illogical. They also need to do stupid fucking things because the author is too dumb to think of a better course of action. The world needs to be paper thin and you need much much more wish fulfillment. Try again. Go and find a top trash novel and use Crtl-C and Crtl-V change the names. Voila. Lolol character gets in trouble. Magic plot device truth potion out of trouble. Character cannot speak local languages struggles for one chapter. System - here you go ****er. You can now speak every language no need to struggle. **Character** - 5/5 Ah **** I have to read more so I can find another character other than the MC. I am sooo lazy that this is a chore. Shit Beardy face doesn’t speak intelligibly keep reading. Oh. Great. Cliché woman in authority. She’s perfect in every way and the MC is not smitten at all. Ok lets keep reading I bet your balls Lumi falls for him for no reason in a chapter. WTF chapter 4 and she still doesn’t trust someone she just met with the strangest story she has ever heard? And you call this a trash novel? FAIL. **Flow** - 4/5 The Flow is excellent. Another FAIL for trash novel I didn’t have to reread anything to decipher your bull****. I take one point off for over use of names. James did this. James did that. James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, James, I FUCKING GET HIS NAME IS JAMES!!!!!!! Suggestion: give up. you suck at writing trash novels.

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