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Benjamin_Lv104yr
2020-08-03 15:59

Honestly most of the good points of my review comes from how faithful the author stayed to the hellsing universe and the personality of the characters there but that's about everything good I have to say about this novel. The story? It's literally just a retelling off the hellsing universe but from Seras' perspective. She may know the future but it still just flows down the normal plotline because she wants it to which circles back around to the entire issue with it just being a retelling. Powers? The authors gives Sera an ability to ask any question she wants and get the answer to it and this power is woefully underused. Not only that but he has Alucard forbid her from using her teleportation ability just cos hurrr durrr. Circling back around to the story. Whilst Alucard is fighting Icognito the author gives Incognito some bs ability to teleport the mc to the avatar world and has him disable her ability to teleport citing some bs about how he disabled her system when this just doesn't make any sense at all because even tho the power gives her a user interface she should be able to still teleport back to the Hellsing universe just by willing it. This plotline was extremely forced this in conjunction to seeing when the last update was made me decide to drop this novel. To summarise: This is a retelling of the hellsing world from Seras' perspective with some arbitrary bs nerfs that don't make sense and when the author strays from accurately doing this he brings in very forced plotlines. 3/10 would not recommend and I feel like I've wasted my time reading this.

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WhitemistLv5

Why four stars if you are rating three out of ten?

Benjamin_Lv10

Because the wn rating comes from 5 different factors and 3/10 is the rating I give on the quality of the novel and whether I think it's worth reading.

Whitemist:Why four stars if you are rating three out of ten?
Primordial_OriginLv2

Thanks for this honest review. Not some Hellssing fanboy/girl reviews with nothing really substantial to why they rated high. Only 'I like this' and 'I love that' without being constructive. Saved my time.God bless. P.S. Really hate when MC's are nerf especially when said powers were granted as a wish not personally acquired/earned. Why give OP or strong powers but underused or lowers it in the end? He could have wished to be a 'Vampire Progenitor' instead. I think that would be more interesting. Not some lower vampire vulnerable to orders/compelling of someone higher.

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