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eridani
eridaniLv44yreridani

MC decided to do something, in fact, he is so smart that he had already thought of four alternate ways of achieving it. First was about blah blah blah; second involved a lengthy explanation of highly irrelevant things. His third plan is obviously explained in detail too, of course he won't be using it, heck he won't use his fourth option either but author will describe it in 10 paragraphs anyway. No, instead; what MC did was blah blah blah long narration of more uninteresting facts. Alright, so writing style sucks; but character design does too. The only character development that you will see is MC every other character is incidental and it's screen time is of a few chapters at most. Interaction? What's that? They can exchange a few words, but that's it, 9 pm news have more character development than this.

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World Domination System

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ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6ThrustThunder

Ouch. The purple prose and word salading is thick is this novel, huh? Few things more off putting in a novel then when the Author has a 100/1 monologue to actual action ratio...

Noire
NoireLv13Noire

Wow, talk about lacking reading comprehension.

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THE_LEVI
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