ThrustThunder
I'm just here to kill time at work. More than happy to hear you out, crack a joke or just debate about a Novel's plot holes! Remember to not take anything I say too seriously, it's all in good fun!
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Well put. The argument: "How did you develop the habit of consuming media too quickly?" is a strangely unobservant attitude to have considering We're on a platform specifically designed to provide oneself with more literature then any person could ever conceivably read... If I wanted short and to the point, I'd watch p*rn. If I wanted to waste large quantities of time on little result, I'd go plant flowers. For my reading pleasure I prefer a story that has both quality AND quantity when it come to prose and pacing, and it's okay to point out if an Author is lacking in that balance and move on to another offering. Thanks to reviews like this I know that this Novel isn't right for me and I thank the reviewer for taking a moment out of his limited time on this Earth to point me in another direction.
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B-baka!!!
WooHoo!!! It took 618 chapters but Leon finally put some points into dexterity!!
It really seems the Author has no idea what he wants to do with the story anymore. It's just numbers going up for dozens of chapters at a time. This story really peaked during the Harbinger planet arc and has just been a slow downward slog since.
Hey WebNovel, how about finishing all the existing stories you picked up earlier, before you start translating new novels. In the last year you dropped like 5 or 6 popular novels which were completed for 50-70% Seriously, whats the point for me to buy premium for this novel or other, if in the end you are going to drop it midway? I'd much more prefer if I can get 6 chapters daily from one novel, instead of 2 chapters from 3 novels. I'd even pay some money since its that what you are after, but like don't even think about getting a dolla from me before you pick up the novels you dropped and finished the existing translations. But if you still try to take new novels, at least pick up something good. Or else you will loose majority of your readers. You will not get any profit like this, c'mon, WebNovel dawg, you can get 1 dollar from 100000 average readers or 10 dollars from 100 rich readers, its obvious which is more profitable. You get my idea, right?
Review as of chapter 72. I tried. I truly tried this to give the novel a chance. The MC is just not interesting to follow. I understand that the author said it will change around chapter 23 or so but I could not get there. The MC was just too stupid, too arrogant, too boring. Thank you for the attempt Mr. Author. I just could not stick around.
Last chapter: "There were no jurisdictions, neither an independent proper body to decide which guild would get to attempt a dungeon." This chapter: "I'm the guy who decides which Guilds would get a chance to enter the Dungeon, based on criteria that must have come from some sort of Proper body."
Arnold hates annoying love interests. Readers hate annoying love interests. The Author has acknowledged she's an annoying stalker... So why is she even in the story, while his "Beloved" sister has been abandoned?
Nice
"Unlike America, Guilds don't have a Monopoly, there's a Queue." Two sentences later: "Guilds would buy exclusive rights, thus having a Monopoly." ...Really Author-sama, do you even read what you write?
Dump all my points into INT because it's obvious I'm too stupid to distribute them properly...
Or Poseidon's Blessing. Y'know, the skill that gives him FREE HP EVERY LEVEL!
Because that INT score is just for show. (That and the Author doesn't really know how LitRPG novels work)
Yet he's still an idiot. Example: Getting a bunch of stupid tribal tattoos like as if his name was Keith.