Plotholes so abundant you don't know where the plot is. Author keeps having to forced feed villains against the MC. Powerful people that somehow can recruit millions of people while MC retains only a thousand. Introduced a powerful trillionaire ally that treat him as a brother but somehow ended up as a middling side character. Overall an author that makes up stuff out of the air to fit his own narrative. An author that has no respect for his own creation. For people to give this a 5 star is a statement to the current level of the worlds literature.

Now the story makes less sense. So someone powerful can recruit 10 million grunts but the great and merciless ethan can't. Does that mean he's just a poor bloke? What a poor dumb MC, can't even have a sub guild that has millions of people. So that the story doesn't have to force itself keeping the MC group always outnumbered, hence the author bullishly making his way through to "balance" things out.

He went through travelling not thinking on how to save the princess instead thought of it on the spot? This is the inconsistencies in writing that kills many stories. The MC suddenly not thinking ahead of a plan hence being discovered by the AI. While the author is drumming his fingers thinking of his well made "plot". When in actuality he just forced his MC to act out of character to make the "plot" possible.

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The MC is, even with all these lame excuses people put out. It doesn't change the fact that the MC is a bit stupid. You made a game where only marvel characters are referenced, and the MC think it is not marvel?

Doesn't work with such lame excuse. A game you made in a world where only marvel is referenced? That's just plain stupid.

Based on the replies on this, they're the same as the MC. A bit oblivious. Your excuses doesn't work. If it's another parallel world then everything would be the same. Why is the marvel franchise only the reference here? There's a lot more popular franchises aside from marvel. So having a world that only referenced marvel is a clue in itself.

ahahaha yeah. Was wondering what happened for the last 200 chapters. Did the author suddenly reach puberty?

With such computing powers, he wouldn't lose to any hand to hand fight at all. He can react precisely as he wants. "Fighting" experience is only the development of instinctual actions, you keep practicing so you lessen the reaction time needed. With practice you don't have to think how to react when you see a punch coming. With his gargantuan analyzing ability he'd be invincible. Also telepaths will be no problem, with how fast he's thinking the minds of the telepaths would have turned into mush as soon as they tried entering his mind.

What war are you even talking about? Innocent lives? What? I'm so confused right now. Why would there be any war if they just found the royalty dead? Ever heard of assassination? Also are you misinterpreting the story here? Are we reading the same story, obvious you did after all you managed to reach this far. I quote "That’s why I called them childish and petty, they need to be ordered by mc to stay put"? Isn't it natural to feel anger when your love one has been wronged? Are you also calling a child childish and petty whenever they're angry at their father for beating the living daylight out of their mother? Also since when did this story gave you the idea of shadow garden saving the innocent? It's not like they really went and did something outrageous for such call outs. What, you want them to not show emotions and not react at all? Again that anger and "tantrum" that you mentioned only came out because alexia asked for it. Again I'm repeating, Alexia asked for it.

I think you've missed the entire point of the conversation. They respected the decision that's why they didn't kill her and wiped out the entire kingdom. To even call them being childish and petty, remember the conversation? Alexia wanted to be direct so she got direct. LOL It's the audacity of iris ignoring what happened, her hubris in not apologizing after committing a grievous mistake. Interrogating someone with noble status with torture. Cid is not some stranger hobo, he's the one guiding her sister(beloved mind you) in swordsmanship.She cared about her sister? So why didn't she supervise the questioning? She let her pawns do the job, not questioning whether they can do it or not. It's not surprising that in the original story she's just a whiny spoiled princess surrounded by praise that upon failure she broke down. A leader only due to nepotism that when crisis started happening she's like a headless chicken in the middle of a war.

Thanks for the chapter :D

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Thanks for the chapter :D

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Thanks for the chapter :D

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Thanks for the chapter :D

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Thanks for the chapter :D