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raeyne
raeyneLv56yr
2018-10-04 06:51

I really appreciate that each chapter is pretty lengthy. There are few repetitions, but those are acceptable since the chapter has more to offer than that. I actually appreciate the plot, but I did not really like how ML is yandere/forceful since the start, that it almost became a non-consensual thing.. especially since FL did not like him yet then. He is why the rating is low. How FL fall for him was pretty fast too, which I guess is normal for webnovels, but I really hope there is some underlying reason somewhere that will explain this 😉 also hoping we get to see more ML redeeming points. Good job though, author.. Thanks for the hard work!

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Hello Everyone, First off, thank you for reading my novel! I just have one thought that I've always wanted to share for a while now. It is that I hope you all enjoy reading my novel as much as I enjoy writing it. Please tell me your feelings of the novel, I'll very much appreciate the feedback! P/S: It keeps me going, so please don't hold back. 😊

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