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AvaTheMage
AvaTheMageAuthor6yr
2018-09-11 12:47

Hello Everyone, First off, thank you for reading my novel! I just have one thought that I've always wanted to share for a while now. It is that I hope you all enjoy reading my novel as much as I enjoy writing it. Please tell me your feelings of the novel, I'll very much appreciate the feedback! P/S: It keeps me going, so please don't hold back. 😊

I'm an All Stars System

AvaTheMage
4.5
40 Chs

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Miharu1999
Miharu1999Lv5

🙋🙋🙆👍👍👏

6yr
Senku_Gen
Senku_GenLv15

I love this novel. Interesting storyline. Please update regularly. Thank you.

6yr
Estelle
EstelleLv5

Hello. May i know when it'll be updated? Thank you!

6yr
Other Reviews
flakey0629
flakey0629Lv15

This is based on reading 8 chapters. I enjoy the characters, story, and writing quality so far, but I can't give a good review of the updates and background yet since it's only been 8 chapters. I like the FL since she says levelheaded. The other characters ...so far are likable but more needs to be written about them for me to get a better impression of them. I think this story has potential, so I look forward to reading more. If you are interested in reading about a female lead with a system, give it a try.

6yr

Estelle
EstelleLv5

My kind of genre for system hopping world. But this is just still early review in the chapters. Mature? ☑️ Well thought plot? ☑️ Interesting MC? ☑️ Fluffy romance? ☑️ Straight to the point romance? ☑️ Angst plot here and then? ☑️

6yr
fluffybootydesu
fluffybootydesuLv5

I'm writing a review since I really want to keep on reading this novel! I'm not sure how often chapters are updated, but I like how these chapters are longer than most original novels! As you keep reading, it only gets better, so I'd say give this novel a chance and read at least *2* chapters and then decide if you want to keep going or not. Also~ good luck Author! Fighting! Oh! Can I shamelessly ask for more chapters? I beg of you!! *Crawls and grabs pants with snot hanging from nose* (:

6yr
Muizuwinda
MuizuwindaLv5

I rate 5 star because this novel involved my favorites genre and that's entertainment or what I call showbiz with episodic structure. I hope this novel have romance too. Y(＾_＾)Y

6yr
RoiRed
RoiRedLv14

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation for readers who hesitate, see this as a "Quick Transmigration: Heroine Arrives, Woman Rapidly Retreats" focused on the world of entertainment 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

6yr
AJiminie
AJiminieLv5

I love the plot. It's quite unique in a way that the elements, characters, and storyline are mixed together. For me, it's a new story to read that readers can surely enjoy.

6yr
Julles
JullesLv4

If you like system administrator stories you should give this one a try. I like the fact she didn't die just kidnapped * not spoilers first chaoter*. What I will probably like less is that she always leaves right away after the mission which is sad but also has it's good points since you see the original owner actually getting her dreams the writer should also try to use this and write how the original host does after she takes back over..... this way we get answer to the questions which the princess doesn't want to make since it should be left to the original host so that's a tip I have.... keep it up see slot of potential here...

6yr
S1eepym00n
S1eepym00nLv11

I love ❤️ this story so much! It’s very good. The descriptive words;the flow of the story; the characters personality, etc are awesome 😎👏. The most important part is that it effected my mood/feelings...it feels like I could go through the ups and downs of the characters mood/feelings portrayed in the story. For example, the second arc made me cry 😢. I started reading this story because I of the description...I feel it’s going to be interesting because the idea of it was somewhat different from the other systems and female mc novels that I read so far.(plus that I am a picky reader, it’s hard to find these same type of themes and the ideas in the story itself it’s not repetitive...to let me think 🤔 “oh it’s just another one of the same old thing”) I hope 🤞 that you will keep up the good work and maybe...hopefully finish this story. Thank you 😊 author for bringing this story into life and for your hard work. I am looking forward towards your next chapter. (Also I want to let you know I am your loyal fan of this work😊😍) Looking forward towards your next chapter. And I am sorry if there is too much words...hehe😋I tend to do that when I really like something.☺️

6yr
WidestGrin
WidestGrinLv6

If I should say anything, then it would be...... IS THIS MAGIKYUN RENAISSANCE????? Why is the background so similar??????. . . . Apparently reviews need approx 140 words........soooooooo 😁😁😁😁😁😁 😬😬😬😬😬😬 🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐 Meeeh~meeeeh~ Is it 140 yet??? .. .. .. .. Sigh. Blah blah blah blah blah blah.

6yr
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