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BinyLv56yr
2018-08-08 04:03

This so far is a great story with a mc who starts weak but continues to evolve to higher levels and creatures. The writing is great and I didn't notice a single grammar mistakes. As for the for the other categories it's hard to determine world background and development with so little to go by but there was no big info dump and considering my love for the premise and the writing quality I'm willing to give the book the benefit of the doubt.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

AuthorWiz
4.7
243 Chs

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BinyLv5

Also if the author is reading this I think there's a typo in the first line of the synopsis (wjem instead of when)

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AuthorWizAuthor

Thanks for the review! :) I caught that just a little while ago, haha, that's what I get for editing the synopsis and then not checking for mistakes.

Biny:Also if the author is reading this I think there's a typo in the first line of the synopsis (wjem instead of when)
6yr
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btwineLv11

Oh the irony in this post.

6yr
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LittleSleepyFoxLv14

You've read 3 chapters. Why the hell are you making a review?! What are you even reviewing at this point? Wtf...

6yr
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GoldenKitsuneLv11

Lol

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AurasLv10

Reminds me of game evolve

6yr
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rizaleopantinoLv4

A

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AurasLv10

Best

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manognareddyLv4

Just past dawn, the sun stands with its heavy red head in a black stanchion of trees, waiting for someone to come with his bucket for the foamy white light, and then a long day in the pasture. I too spend my days grazing, feasting on every green moment till darkness calls, and with the others I walk away into the night, swinging the little tin bell of my name.

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33147JimLv15

Ty

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Shameless 5 star rating because I am very confident in the quality of my writing. This work is my entry for Qidian's story contest about Evolved Beasts. I'll keep updating it on the side while I work on my novel, Lord of Time.

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HershallLv14

The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell. Character design is interesting, an MC that is simply an average person is becoming more and more scarce and I think it can bring out a lot of interesting further development as he must face issues he may never have even considered in his average lifestyle and grow from these experiences. World background is presented very well, unlike the info dump that most simply default to, it’s presented slowly and in an interesting fashion that explains the general world while still keeping the readers interest. All in all, a damn good story.

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DeadlinerVLv14

There are a lot of people looking for novels with monster MC and evolution, but most like myself are dispointed by the quality of those novels. This one has a lot of potential (the most promising on qidian as of now in my humble opinion). Only 9 chapter and the world is already building up, and so is the MC, talking about his past and future goals. Keep it up mr author, with enough perseverance and advertising, I'm sure you can make yourself a good and loyal public for this novel.

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I. Want. More. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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freakmedicLv5

I first rate this 5 star for the reviews and I will give another review after chap 50 more like 2 weeks from now and I wish this isn't like the A monster who levels up

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Supreme_LeaderLv12

Uptill where I have read this is a great story bases on evolution. And I like how he is not confined to one form. Instead of having and exp leveling system. He has to gayher bloodlines and energies which is I find interesting. Overall a great read. I hope thr author keeps writing it.

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Armenian_DaoistLv5

I've followed this author across several platforms and I enjoy everything that he writes. This story has a lot of potential with it's unique power system and solid world building. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it.

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