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Biny
BinyLv56yr
2018-08-08 12:03

This so far is a great story with a mc who starts weak but continues to evolve to higher levels and creatures. The writing is great and I didn't notice a single grammar mistakes. As for the for the other categories it's hard to determine world background and development with so little to go by but there was no big info dump and considering my love for the premise and the writing quality I'm willing to give the book the benefit of the doubt.

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Biny
BinyLv5

Also if the author is reading this I think there's a typo in the first line of the synopsis (wjem instead of when)

AuthorWiz
AuthorWizAuthor

Thanks for the review! :) I caught that just a little while ago, haha, that's what I get for editing the synopsis and then not checking for mistakes.

Biny:Also if the author is reading this I think there's a typo in the first line of the synopsis (wjem instead of when)
btwine
btwineLv11

Oh the irony in this post.

LittleSleepyFox
LittleSleepyFoxLv14

You've read 3 chapters. Why the hell are you making a review?! What are you even reviewing at this point? Wtf...

GoldenKitsune
GoldenKitsuneLv11

Lol

Auras
AurasLv10

Reminds me of game evolve

rizaleopantino
rizaleopantinoLv4

A

Auras
AurasLv10

Best

manognareddy
manognareddyLv4

Just past dawn, the sun stands with its heavy red head in a black stanchion of trees, waiting for someone to come with his bucket for the foamy white light, and then a long day in the pasture. I too spend my days grazing, feasting on every green moment till darkness calls, and with the others I walk away into the night, swinging the little tin bell of my name.

33147Jim
33147JimLv15

Ty

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