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HershallLv146yr
2018-08-17 06:03

The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell. Character design is interesting, an MC that is simply an average person is becoming more and more scarce and I think it can bring out a lot of interesting further development as he must face issues he may never have even considered in his average lifestyle and grow from these experiences. World background is presented very well, unlike the info dump that most simply default to, it’s presented slowly and in an interesting fashion that explains the general world while still keeping the readers interest. All in all, a damn good story.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

AuthorWiz
4.7
243 Chs

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DrunkenVeinsLv5

Nice review i guess I think I may check this out now

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FatDragonNeedsANapLv10

I checked it out, it really is pretty damn good.

6yr
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Jojo775Lv3

I feel sorry for you, if you think something that's not written by a teen and has good grammar is some next level ****. The story is nothing special(isn't it just a copy of Re: Monster with a twist?), if it were on goodreads it would be 3/5 at best. Even if you're reading fanfics and web novel originals, at least go on fanfiction.net, this has the lowest possible standard.

6yr
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HershallLv14

It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.

6yr
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Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Deus

6yr
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Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Vult

Hershall:It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.
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HershallLv14

Deus Vult

Lkjfdsay1:Vult
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Jojo775Lv3

Yeah that was a strech to say, I just wanted to educate this poor sob who has rock bottom standards. Standards here are even worse than on Novel Updates and I thought that was the lowest of the low.

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quriLv2

😄

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DrunkenVeinsLv5

Most original novels on her suck ...

Hershall:It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.
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DrunkenVeinsLv5

*here

DrunkenVeins:Most original novels on her suck ...
6yr
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DrunkenVeinsLv5

It's not like Re Monster at all - yes if this was on other sites it would get a lower rating but it's still decent considering that most original novels on here suck

Jojo775:I feel sorry for you, if you think something that's not written by a teen and has good grammar is some next level ****. The story is nothing special(isn't it just a copy of Re: Monster with a twist?), if it were on goodreads it would be 3/5 at best. Even if you're reading fanfics and web novel originals, at least go on fanfiction.net, this has the lowest possible standard.
6yr
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koalerLv4

damn

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XxLINxXLv5

Lol so long

6yr
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morticonLv6

😄

6yr
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JaymagnumLv4

Most of you guys are thinking that the story is more of Remonster twisted. Maybe the evolution may be similar but I doubt

6yr
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Daoist_1000pineLv5

This is literally nothing like remonster it couldn’t be further from it only similarity is evolution and reincarnation that’s about it

Jojo775:Yeah that was a strech to say, I just wanted to educate this poor sob who has rock bottom standards. Standards here are even worse than on Novel Updates and I thought that was the lowest of the low.
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EdwinTrLv11

.

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MeiXue_07Lv10

Nice review, I’ll check it out

6yr
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DAIMONDHDLv5

++

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I first rate this 5 star for the reviews and I will give another review after chap 50 more like 2 weeks from now and I wish this isn't like the A monster who levels up

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Supreme_LeaderLv12

Uptill where I have read this is a great story bases on evolution. And I like how he is not confined to one form. Instead of having and exp leveling system. He has to gayher bloodlines and energies which is I find interesting. Overall a great read. I hope thr author keeps writing it.

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I've followed this author across several platforms and I enjoy everything that he writes. This story has a lot of potential with it's unique power system and solid world building. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it.

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This so far is a great story with a mc who starts weak but continues to evolve to higher levels and creatures. The writing is great and I didn't notice a single grammar mistakes. As for the for the other categories it's hard to determine world background and development with so little to go by but there was no big info dump and considering my love for the premise and the writing quality I'm willing to give the book the benefit of the doubt.

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