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Hershall
HershallLv146yr
2018-08-17 14:03

The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell. Character design is interesting, an MC that is simply an average person is becoming more and more scarce and I think it can bring out a lot of interesting further development as he must face issues he may never have even considered in his average lifestyle and grow from these experiences. World background is presented very well, unlike the info dump that most simply default to, it’s presented slowly and in an interesting fashion that explains the general world while still keeping the readers interest. All in all, a damn good story.

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DrunkenVeins
DrunkenVeinsLv5

Nice review i guess I think I may check this out now

FatDragonNeedsANap
FatDragonNeedsANapLv10

I checked it out, it really is pretty damn good.

Jojo775
Jojo775Lv3

I feel sorry for you, if you think something that's not written by a teen and has good grammar is some next level ****. The story is nothing special(isn't it just a copy of Re: Monster with a twist?), if it were on goodreads it would be 3/5 at best. Even if you're reading fanfics and web novel originals, at least go on fanfiction.net, this has the lowest possible standard.

Hershall
HershallLv14

It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.

Lkjfdsay1
Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Deus

Lkjfdsay1
Lkjfdsay1Lv10

Vult

Hershall:It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.
Hershall
HershallLv14

Deus Vult

Lkjfdsay1:Vult
Jojo775
Jojo775Lv3

Yeah that was a strech to say, I just wanted to educate this poor sob who has rock bottom standards. Standards here are even worse than on Novel Updates and I thought that was the lowest of the low.

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quri
quriLv2

😄

DrunkenVeins
DrunkenVeinsLv5

Most original novels on her suck ...

Hershall:It’s not really that close to re:monster, but I can see where you’re coming from with that. Yeah maybe on other sites it’d get a 3/5, but on here it’s the cream of the crop lol. Honestly have you seen some of the **** on here that ends up with a decent rating it’s baffling, so to make up for all the terrible ones with high ratings of course I also gotta give a high rating.
DrunkenVeins
DrunkenVeinsLv5

*here

DrunkenVeins:Most original novels on her suck ...
DrunkenVeins
DrunkenVeinsLv5

It's not like Re Monster at all - yes if this was on other sites it would get a lower rating but it's still decent considering that most original novels on here suck

Jojo775:I feel sorry for you, if you think something that's not written by a teen and has good grammar is some next level ****. The story is nothing special(isn't it just a copy of Re: Monster with a twist?), if it were on goodreads it would be 3/5 at best. Even if you're reading fanfics and web novel originals, at least go on fanfiction.net, this has the lowest possible standard.
koaler
koalerLv4

damn

XxLINxX
XxLINxXLv5

Lol so long

morticon
morticonLv6

😄

Jaymagnum
JaymagnumLv4

Most of you guys are thinking that the story is more of Remonster twisted. Maybe the evolution may be similar but I doubt

Daoist_1000pine
Daoist_1000pineLv5

This is literally nothing like remonster it couldn’t be further from it only similarity is evolution and reincarnation that’s about it

Jojo775:Yeah that was a strech to say, I just wanted to educate this poor sob who has rock bottom standards. Standards here are even worse than on Novel Updates and I thought that was the lowest of the low.
EdwinTr
EdwinTrLv11

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MeiXue_07
MeiXue_07Lv10

Nice review, I’ll check it out

DAIMONDHD
DAIMONDHDLv5

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