Writing quality is excellent, while not perfect, there is nothing that breaks story immersion. Update stability according to the dates the chapters were uploaded was fairly good at the beginning, but became more and more unstable towards the end, starting with several chapters a day and ending with a chapter every couple of weeks. Excellent story. Shame there isn't a sequel. Plot makes sense and is consistent. Love how the MC is relatable and not too overpowered. Lots more character development than in most stories, but the development of side characters is pretty much non-existent, merely dropping them back into their cannon roles despite any changes made. The world is basically cannon. It's a good world, but very little was done to expand it, and then it was merely technique development and not the background. A good read.
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