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Kunnandi
KunnandiLv136yr
2018-08-27 08:05

Haha this is what you call extraordinary why? Because the Mc dies not only that he doesn't go and be op like others it like the first chapter haha my my this is what you call a good fan fiction you should finish this it would bring you benefits in your writing skills as an author muffin time and this is what all I could say as a 3-4 years of being a Daoist my self haha. Good luck.

Naruto world reincarnation

Muffin_Time
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73 Chs

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MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas

6yr

Spider123
Spider123Lv15

Hi, I just got done reading your novel. I have to say I really like your story. It's very entertaining--keep on coming with the updates. Please don't stop halfway with the novel. I really want to see how your version of Naruto plays off. On behalf of me and all your fans, thank you for having the inspiration, patience, and courage to write this novel. Please keep the updates coming, thank you.

6yr
Bakar
BakarLv6

Amazing!!!! One of my favorite novel. I love the story, it chage from where we get an OP mc. And the way he is introduced is intresting. Keep going love it👍👍👍

6yr
gingerghostflewby
gingerghostflewbyLv5

I love this story! For me the most amazing aspect is the character design. The author took the limited room provided by a fanfic and developed a relatable but still cool and interesting mc, who's slightly op but because of his hard work, not from relying on random power boosts from the system. I also love how he fits into the original naruto world, and his reincarnation system. Moreover, he's the first mc I've found that's equally focused on combat and medical ninjutsu. This novel is much better than most generic fanfics, and I can't recommend it enough!

6yr
Elder
ElderLv11

Boring The author has no imagination When you read chapter 12 you will understand what I'm writing about To rework and add creativity, now there is no point in reading if there is something else to read.

6yr
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Patorikku_Desu
Patorikku_DesuLv6

kereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen

6yr
kurolykan
kurolykanLv10

one of the best novels/fan-fics i have ever read emotional and it made me think of the characters in a more personal and deep maner very touching story i wish to read a second part some day

5yr
Kunnandi
KunnandiLv13

Hehe muffin if you ever see this please call me selfless haha rating A five star even if you didn't updated for a week. Please update and share why you didn't updated for a week.

6yr
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