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MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv76yr
2018-08-21 17:17

Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas

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BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Not sure what you mean i always spit my food in peoples face if they make crappy food. How do people learn to make delicious food if they cannot clean there own ****e of their face ?

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Oh, I get it. No wonder, you're Gordon Ramsay

BloodyDaoist_:Not sure what you mean i always spit my food in peoples face if they make crappy food. How do people learn to make delicious food if they cannot clean there own ****e of their face ?
ExiledLord
ExiledLordLv15

Now I had just popped in to see the summary but this was the first comment so this is in no way a comment on the novel. Writing is akin to art, but some people have the skill of a 2-year-old with crayons drawing on a wall. You're more inclined to scrub it off the wall. it might be a masterpiece when the toddler looks at it but from an objective viewpoint, it's still crap.

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Yeah, sorry 'bout that, some readers telling an author to stop writing because they didn't like it(in a harsh way). That's why I wrote this and warn them to not discourage authors. Some authors were seriously tried to entertain the reader (by doing research on anime and English grammar). It's just a hobby so don't hurt their feelings.

ExiledLord:Now I had just popped in to see the summary but this was the first comment so this is in no way a comment on the novel. Writing is akin to art, but some people have the skill of a 2-year-old with crayons drawing on a wall. You're more inclined to scrub it off the wall. it might be a masterpiece when the toddler looks at it but from an objective viewpoint, it's still crap.
TheDemonNazI
TheDemonNazILv4

i know what ye mean by that but just dont be toooooooo rude about it. just instead of spitting **** in there face. spit it in front of them so they see whats wrong.... god nvm this sounds disgusting. i just imagined someone studying spit up food ugh i need an *****

BloodyDaoist_:Not sure what you mean i always spit my food in peoples face if they make crappy food. How do people learn to make delicious food if they cannot clean there own ****e of their face ?
BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv13

Btw my comment has nothing to do with the story

drinking_water
drinking_waterLv4

Best reply ever!!

BloodyDaoist_:Btw my comment has nothing to do with the story
ExiledLord
ExiledLordLv15

When one of the first couple of words is already misspelled, you know you're not in for a good time reading. Like trying to understand a grade schoolers novel

kusoroo
kusorooLv4

Personal opinion is bad now?

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Nope, but it just a reminder as a fellow reader to respect each other. Then again, it depends on how you define 'bad' though. If your words 'rob' author's spirit to ever write again, I think you're bad enough. I want to believe that we, readers, have enough conscience/intelligence about how to write our opinion.

kusoroo:Personal opinion is bad now?
Redanxelar
RedanxelarLv5

If you don't throw rotten eggs at the bad painting so as to ruin it when the painter paints better and becomes famous that bad painting will be a blemish to his reputation, so throwing rotting eggs at it is actually helpful to the painter its telling the painter comeon man you paint cramp throw this away and try and paint a better one, complementing a bad painting is doing the painter bad the painter would think wow I painted a masterpiece he would not know it is crap and try to improve.

Banks94
Banks94Lv2

Movingcorpse i don't troll content i don't like I troll people i don't like and you asking for decency on the web is so stupid that I had to create an account to tell you how much I hate you. Seriously if a few bad comments break an author's spirit then they shouldn't write so my answer to you is to go **** yourself.

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Exp

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Exp

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kaushee
kausheeLv11

Some people are so ungrateful. They don't feel any value if they didn't buy it. So stupid.

Dao_of_laziness
Dao_of_lazinessLv14

Don't it's just funny

BloodyDaoist_:Not sure what you mean i always spit my food in peoples face if they make crappy food. How do people learn to make delicious food if they cannot clean there own ****e of their face ?
jojojajahelp
jojojajahelpLv4

Reviews are meant to help an author improve. I'm not going to only rate 5 stars simply because they put effort into it.

AngelChild
AngelChildLv1

What???? Your probably a fat otaku then or that's a joke

BloodyDaoist_:Not sure what you mean i always spit my food in peoples face if they make crappy food. How do people learn to make delicious food if they cannot clean there own ****e of their face ?
AngelChild
AngelChildLv1

You criticise it don't just call it bad

TheDemonNazI:i know what ye mean by that but just dont be toooooooo rude about it. just instead of spitting **** in there face. spit it in front of them so they see whats wrong.... god nvm this sounds disgusting. i just imagined someone studying spit up food ugh i need an *****
AngelChild
AngelChildLv1

Says someone that is not a painter like stop being so hypocritical that's like saying you understand how to cook if you watch Chopped

Redanxelar:If you don't throw rotten eggs at the bad painting so as to ruin it when the painter paints better and becomes famous that bad painting will be a blemish to his reputation, so throwing rotting eggs at it is actually helpful to the painter its telling the painter comeon man you paint cramp throw this away and try and paint a better one, complementing a bad painting is doing the painter bad the painter would think wow I painted a masterpiece he would not know it is crap and try to improve.
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