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2019-09-29 21:30

The development of the story is quite good. Though it's not yet complete but you can feel the actions and thrilled of the story. The author can portray the motif of the character and it's role to make their lives full with tremendous activity. The character show the advantage of being on top and how to make it sustainable in a certain period of time. The character should take part of it's role to be ahead from the others. In real life the main character portray that to excel in these life competition you should be ahead from what others are thinking...

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