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bavieca
baviecaLv136yr
2018-08-22 09:37

I have read well past what is translated. If you like MC's that only need the barest of excuses to kidnap and rape as many women as he wants, then this story is for you. Kingdom building with DBZ style power up fights. Expect some fights to take several chapters as the MC and his opponent power up over and over again until everyone else is just left to stare and watch as he fights. Story had a lot of good concepts and I was looking forward to seeing where it went, but frankly, i don't like reading about an unabashed rapist and I stopped enjoying DBZ years ago. Translation quality is decent even though he takes some liberties at parts. The translator is consistent. But in the end I have no rape fantasies and kingdom building is meaningless because of the individually overpowered MC to this degree.

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kumadam
kumadamLv6

Oh what.. well at least this spared me from having a greater disappointment when I finally get to that part. Thank you for the heads up!

Shebby
ShebbyLv14

What of Dbz Abridged

bavieca
baviecaLv13

DBZ abridged is great man, but it's only great because it is abridged, and funny. This author is using these style fights to pad his chapters, a fight that in the end was boring as hell ended up lasting a dozen chapters. some people like this, it's very phallic seeing the MC do power ups and all that. issue is, that's not what the story promised in the beginning.

Shebby:What of Dbz Abridged
PhalconX
PhalconXLv6

MC is a rapist...!!!

salcho87
salcho87Lv5

niceee a rapist must read it then

Mjolnirk38
Mjolnirk38Lv12

So I'm a bit confused. Having read up to chapter 389, he has not shown any "rapist" tendencies. In fact he has barely shown any interest towards any of the women in his life. Or did you mean that further into the story he develops like this?

bavieca
baviecaLv13

when it comes time for him to refine the national defense tools of other countries you will know. [spoiler] I believe india's peacock will be the first. he has his people kidnap the women of the royal family, and then forces them to all consume the fruit to force them to stay in the world, then rapes them to refine the peacock. [/spoiler]

Mjolnirk38:So I'm a bit confused. Having read up to chapter 389, he has not shown any "rapist" tendencies. In fact he has barely shown any interest towards any of the women in his life. Or did you mean that further into the story he develops like this?
Sazzbot
SazzbotLv5

And MC havent taken a shower for a year or 2 and didnt go to toillet at all, his stomach is a black hole where all the food disappears

bavieca
baviecaLv13

you know, I have been wondering whether the guards are washing him down after he craps all over himself while asleep each time he spends weeks in the virtual world...

Sazzbot:And MC havent taken a shower for a year or 2 and didnt go to toillet at all, his stomach is a black hole where all the food disappears
Greed_King
Greed_KingLv6

+1

Mjolnirk38:So I'm a bit confused. Having read up to chapter 389, he has not shown any "rapist" tendencies. In fact he has barely shown any interest towards any of the women in his life. Or did you mean that further into the story he develops like this?
SubtomicLine80
SubtomicLine80Lv6

... chapter 410 and he has just had his first sexual relationship which was started by the female ... idk what else to say your review is stupid and false and incriminating so please reread the novel up to where we are now and find where he has raped women please and thank you

bavieca
baviecaLv13

unless the translater is editing them out, the moment you get to the chapter where it happens, will you feel like an idiot then?

SubtomicLine80:... chapter 410 and he has just had his first sexual relationship which was started by the female ... idk what else to say your review is stupid and false and incriminating so please reread the novel up to where we are now and find where he has raped women please and thank you
SubtomicLine80
SubtomicLine80Lv6

no i wouldn't i would however feel that its unfortunate that the tn is editing an important part of the though.

bavieca:unless the translater is editing them out, the moment you get to the chapter where it happens, will you feel like an idiot then?
bavieca
baviecaLv13

still, it does happen, and on a massive scale. so I have no intent of retracting my opinion or even proving it. take it for what you will. my intention with the review is to warn the people that hate rape in stories away. if it doesn't bother you that the MC is a mass rapist, then this review wasn't meant for you.

SubtomicLine80:no i wouldn't i would however feel that its unfortunate that the tn is editing an important part of the though.
FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5

If your review is true I'm going to spend more time reading this novel.

VoidofDrakness
VoidofDraknessLv12

Hm.. mass rapist are these numbers going into the 100s (women that he’s raped)

Kerail
KerailLv12

No add some ziroes. Harem is more like city and the kingdom building power will come mostly from rapes. You will loos count on main women and side rapes are countless. Good novel untill it went down the toilet. Translation has just not gone so far.

VoidofDrakness:Hm.. mass rapist are these numbers going into the 100s (women that he’s raped)
VoidofDrakness
VoidofDraknessLv12

Oh.. well am gonna read till that point and maybe further considering how it affects me

Kerail:No add some ziroes. Harem is more like city and the kingdom building power will come mostly from rapes. You will loos count on main women and side rapes are countless. Good novel untill it went down the toilet. Translation has just not gone so far.
RaiquiaArbiter
RaiquiaArbiterLv6

So how was it now? Did it already escalated to that point?

VoidofDrakness:Oh.. well am gonna read till that point and maybe further considering how it affects me
VoidofDrakness
VoidofDraknessLv12

Nope not even man I’m at the latest chp and he hasn’t even done things with the women he has captured

RaiquiaArbiter:So how was it now? Did it already escalated to that point?
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