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raptorcsy
raptorcsyLv66yr
2018-07-11 14:54

Aside from the very unique and unexpected way he dies which i think is a lil ingenious but still somewhat forced. Wellll the story development and story itself errrrr :(

Strongest Protagonist's Aura

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Project_Traveler
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If i were to be given the chance i will choose the power of creation..why would you choose Aura system .when you can create anything with the power of creation..just why

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Yuyuyuyuyu
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Strongest Tragedy Aura - Host luck -99999 Author kinda superbly stupid? He thinks Mc/protagonist needs a tragic life etc to be strong lol the worst is the authors stupidity and makes Mc's every turn becomes tragic, doesn't know how to make "chance encounter" that's what "protagonists aura" supposed to be, have the mc encounter good fortune to power up, not ridiculously send him to tragic states and those around him. Hope this enlighten our stupid author, or put a tragedy/rape/stupid author tag on your novel so people will not waste time

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Morvian
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Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it. Update stability?? who knows!~ Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~ Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~ World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~ my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~ at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~ though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~

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Zeno
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oh ****, holy ****, author, if you're going to write a novel of this kind, do it right, because it gives cancer to the eyes, this novel deserves the Nobel prize for being the **** **** of the year.

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This novel is only good to pass the time the MC is crap story development is crap and he followed by misfortune everywhere he goes and cause those around him to die this is a continuous cycle

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ProfessorofCulture
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it got stupid real fast. The first few chapters were manageable till it made me feel like the author is high on something really dangerous for health.

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