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2018-10-10 11:38

Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it. Update stability?? who knows!~ Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~ Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~ World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~ my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~ at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~ though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~

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