Review Detail of Chrissy239 in Dragonborn Saga

Pretty much everything about this fic is great, the story, the characters, explanations can be a bit long but are full of useful information. The only complaint I have is that the grammar while not terrible isn't good either, though that's to be expected from a non-english native. Get someone that either english is their first language or they know it enough to teach others to check over your work for errors. To me grammar is the most important part of a story because if you have poor grammar it ruins the rest. Poor grammar tends to take you out of the story because to native English speakers it just doesn't sound right and is jarring, it jerks you right out of the imagination.