Review Detail of delta12 in Dragonborn Saga

Just like some people said, it actually a fanfic done right. Unfortunately I think the author probably sometimes forgot that he didn't write an erotica. In the beginning, all those chuni thing actually kinda funny. The fan services with the bathhouse wench still tolerable, but when he oversexualized it with degenerating one of the woman the MC banging secretly in his office like a swine (he actually made her "OINK"), turn two of MC's love interest as a bisexual slut that will lick each other if MC absent during their horny moment and dual cultivation BS, then all oblivion broke lose. I think the author felt to the same hole like author of twilight by self insertion to much. It"s a shame that the hentai thing now integrated with the main story again. I had to drop it after the dual cultivation thing and the kitty moonlight incident that might or might not be lead to bestiality in the future. Let's hope not. Perhaps I will pick it up again in the future if there"s an abridged version.