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2018-07-02 05:38

Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go: 1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu. 2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it. 3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved. 3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on. 4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v) 5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week: - Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter - Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters - Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chapters I will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters. 6) I usually post 1 chapter per day. 7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for? Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!

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DoaOfOneLv10

I havent read this yet but, I plan on it and it seems to me that u really care for this novel. I hope u dont drop it and keep up the good work!

MashiroSymphonyLv6

Thank you for all the chapters you have written and will write in future. I enjoy reading your novel.

laadidaLv4

Thanks author! I have been reading your novel for quite a while. It sure is refreshing to have some cool headed yet caring and not all brawn MC. Also if you need proofreader, i can help you with that :D

zerochanLv6

Thank you for the chapters.Hope you find a proofreader or editor soon

Azrael4355Lv6

Tried reading this book sadly I couldn't make it pass the 7th chapter. Granted gods aren't suppose to be mental giant's but when you get summoned and feel super weak due to lack of faith and you act like a spoiled little princess, and throwing logic and common sense out the window. Well had to drop your book, others will probably like it and i had good hopes sadly the way you wrote that Artemis with zero common sense did me in 😂 i hope your future gods have at least high school level common sense bud.

HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir?

Chanselie_IILv6

I'm starving because i do not have a chapter a day... Estou morrendo porque não tenho um capitulo por dia..

bookman12Lv5

have you thought about using roman formations

Jimmy95Lv2

Bonjour l'auteur je suis français je trouve que ton roman a un gros potentiel et de bonne idée ce que j'adore, il y a juste une chose qui me fait peur c'est il y aura des bataille avec des armée et des territoire avec de plus gros nombre de troupe et population dans le futur ? Parce que je trouve les chiffre un peu trop petit à mon goût merci. Ps: merci pour ceux qui sont pas francophone. Et encore merci pour les chapitre.

phamtonbulletAuthor

I think it depends what you define for OP but at the end I will say that no, he isnt. I mean he is a cripple after all xD

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir?
phamtonbulletAuthor

Yes I have and I will, eventually.

bookman12:have you thought about using roman formations
phamtonbulletAuthor

Hello friend, well yeah from now the battles are with less numbers than it should be but that is because the population off both twons, Tulip and Wasteland Valley are really low, that is also because of the geographical location they are in. Hope I answer your question

Jimmy95:Bonjour l'auteur je suis français je trouve que ton roman a un gros potentiel et de bonne idée ce que j'adore, il y a juste une chose qui me fait peur c'est il y aura des bataille avec des armée et des territoire avec de plus gros nombre de troupe et population dans le futur ? Parce que je trouve les chiffre un peu trop petit à mon goût merci. Ps: merci pour ceux qui sont pas francophone. Et encore merci pour les chapitre.
phamtonbulletAuthor

Sorry about that friend, yeah I promise one chapter per day, however, for the editing and the fact that I have some creative issues xD, I had to reduce the number of chapters per week ;(, the actual arc that we are in is kind of hard for me because I never in my life write an actual war, however, when we pass this arc, my passe will be faster for releasing the chapters :)

Chanselie_II:I'm starving because i do not have a chapter a day... Estou morrendo porque não tenho um capitulo por dia..
phamtonbulletAuthor

Thank you~

MashiroSymphony:Thank you for all the chapters you have written and will write in future. I enjoy reading your novel.
phamtonbulletAuthor

thank you~

DoaOfOne:I havent read this yet but, I plan on it and it seems to me that u really care for this novel. I hope u dont drop it and keep up the good work!
Chanselie_IILv6

Okay, thanks for replying and always posting some chapters I hope this ess novel grows pretty mano, I'm very fan In my Portuguese version (Na minha versão em português) Está bem, valeu por responder e sempre postar alguns capitulos espero que ess novel cresça bastante mano, sou muito fã

phamtonbullet:Sorry about that friend, yeah I promise one chapter per day, however, for the editing and the fact that I have some creative issues xD, I had to reduce the number of chapters per week ;(, the actual arc that we are in is kind of hard for me because I never in my life write an actual war, however, when we pass this arc, my passe will be faster for releasing the chapters :)
Jimmy95Lv2

Merci pour ta réponse auteur perso hâte à la suite des chapitres Ps: le travail dur est toujours récompense 🏆

phamtonbullet:Hello friend, well yeah from now the battles are with less numbers than it should be but that is because the population off both twons, Tulip and Wasteland Valley are really low, that is also because of the geographical location they are in. Hope I answer your question
HansTheCoolLv5

That's unfortunate, thanks for replying though

phamtonbullet:I think it depends what you define for OP but at the end I will say that no, he isnt. I mean he is a cripple after all xD
KAI0Lv4

Have you tried Grammarly?

phamtonbulletAuthor

Hello friend, I wanted to thank you for the help, yeah I admit that my grammar sucks but I tries to improve everyday, I fail though :( XD, Anyway, if you want to help with the novel and u have the time, you are more than welcome. Write me to this email : TheSupremeSovereignSystem@hotmail.com Bye bye~

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HerienLv14

The writing is lower on the spectrum but I won't say trash to others novel I read. However, from the comment I read so far it seem that it really bad before he got an editor. There might be fews errors stil in need of tweak. What kill me is the characters and the setting;to be specefic it would be system. The system is absurd as it can summon gods yet it can't fucking heal the main protagonist. Then the wolf ****en neuter that leg. I couldve deal with a weak character but strong in other areas but when the MC solve the problem through plot Amor by allying with the wolf that made him pratically dead as a character and more of a puppet. The otherhand, the puppeter isnt well thought out or I'm expecting too much from a system novel. It doesnt give ant expantion of the system and why it all Earth(Greek) Gods. For example. Were the Greek God s ever worshipped in the the new the planet or is the system just generating/ acquiring Souls with potential of being gods with the geberated menories basebon the epics og hero and gods from Earth. Also, it seem that that MC could be more than a mortal or a mere God base on the system method of empowering him through collecing ,training, and battling wild goddesses. Also, i wouldnt have mind if he sacrifice a leg for godly speed or something but no he had to plotamored into allying with a wolf that would eventually be enemies. I say that because the wolf or Lyon; whaterver the greek word for wolf will be enemoes base on his backstory and MC identity of work traveler from a modern Democrat developed country which destroy the envirement and treat animal as pet as well. So it pointless and meanless other waste of time . ******Note I haven't got passchapter 50

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