Review Detail of paja in Fantasy System
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Story development I've just read first 20 chapters, i have no idea whats going on. Only system and no story at all (i want to be stronger) and 2 chapters plot. Its just dont make sense. Character- have no idea i know that he is handsome. Wooden character. I dont know anything about the world- 1 sect 1 city 1 country. Chapters are like " Today lets do that" and nothing else, characters are stupid or blind ( from criple to fighting with king in 4 days!) Noboty finds that weird. One of the worst that ive read but yeah idea is nice. Just poor writing.
Fantasy System
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The idea is nice but just gath er a couple of novel fans get them drunk and you can get better ideas that this one. The smartest character I have read about so far is his little sister and she isn't even 10yo. I didn't want to write a review because I can't give it 0 stars. Except the fact that you gave it 2 stars I totally agree with what you said.
Then you can go back to reading chinese or japanese or whatever freaking main characters who go around collecting girls like pokemon.
Joker7ss:The idea is nice but just gath er a couple of novel fans get them drunk and you can get better ideas that this one. The smartest character I have read about so far is his little sister and she isn't even 10yo. I didn't want to write a review because I can't give it 0 stars. Except the fact that you gave it 2 stars I totally agree with what you said.