that was so dumb that i dont know what to say

actually not, hamburger takes a name from hamburg in germany, hot dog history starts from frankfurt, sandwitch is from neolit period, nowhere near US.

well 4 chapters and i said enought. basically story could end after this. hes overpovered as fck by this point.

only 17 chaps free, and half of thatis description of cooking, i have no idea how this story will go and no idea about world background, basically i dont know anything about this book basically. so no idea if it is worth paying for. rating as for chapter 17, so basically medicore all across the board

im usually not giving 5 stars, im picky when it comes to stories. this story looks like next masterpiece, flow of the story dont look rushed, building for every final is done suprisingly well. story is capturing you in a trance sometimes, and mc is made to be genius and he really looks like one. only thing that i can say is unsatisfactionary is update rate at 2 chaps a week. But for this chapter lenght and quality im ready to suffer even longer. 5/5

tell me im a chinease author without teling me you are chinease author

good start of a story, i prefered your writing style from early chapters, they have some charm to them, I curious about story development, if this will be good as it is now im planning to stay for long time

and now saint can send admiral for him, lets see if he can run from buster call. what a bs

in chap 52 author wanted honest opinion about his work, well quality wise its nice piece of work compared to other fanfics out there its like solid after some first chapters that make me want to drop it (quality mostly) but it gets noticably better. you can see what author want to picture( first mostly from his notes) but later you can see easier what he wants to pixture, like changes that quirk made to him on psychological level. after that you can see what hes doing with that and character get some depth, still a little shallow but its a thing that not many authors even bother doing. but its a must if you want to build your mc in 3d.still 5 star from me at last its readable and interesting, still nothing with fireworks but worth your time.

author when will obito fanfic come back from hiatus? its my favourite and this one is good as well but still prefer other work ps you got my stones

check the strange talent of cedrig strove its one piece fanfic naruto wind calamity and genjutsu demon are great( sadly second one will be propably droped author have problems with updates since like 2 months ago).absolute fan fic gem is HP arcane thief sadly looks like its dropped as well, hard to belive author anymore that he will be back even on his patreon hes not updating so thats that

in 40 words you used "body" like 4 times. quality of this work... and thats 1 st chapter

Gandalf what have you done?!

10 chapters and thats all I needed to drop this. in 4 years somebody with no knowledge about magic learns all spells from 7 years of study and invented his own speels. how? he reads a books and saw hp movies. Well i know how car engine works and know all parts but no fckn way i will build it myself from scratch. cringe is too strong for me in this novel, especially if mc is almost 30 y old, you can not see proper mentality. story of wish fulfilment, nothing else.

well fanfic with so many contradictions and plot holes that i cant count them all. Fight scenes are hard to understand, as whole story goes. mc is a puppet not a character, lack of self, cant really read it anymore. op mc who can basiclly destroy the world cant save kushina and minato. makes no sense

well i have a high hopes for this one from starting chapters, later on its just porn while mc fucks everything that moves( or not) and is willing ( or not) chapters are the longest that i ever saw i estimate them to be 10 k words, but half of that is about sex, plot from the start is interesting, after some time it is just no need for plot anymore, he just fucks everything for 5 k words in every chap. still writing is good and seems fluid for me. if you dont know worlds that mc is then you will not understand why hes doing what hes doing not counting find kill/fuck and go on. on good points is system in early chaps, i can see much thinking in puting it here but later it gets plain boring review at chap 20

heavy themed mha fanfic, unigue mc, dark, arrogant with sharp tonque that points mercilesly tells truth about people, midoryama loser?sure, for adualt standards. mc have hogh standards and ppl who dont live to them gets lashing. Mc is not likeable, but at last seems normal and logic in what he is doing and talking. whole plot is coherent and is well thought by 180 chap for people who have enought of power of friendship stuff

first 10 chaps were ok, not good but still ok, but after that its just getting inconherent, situations fromm ass hapening and ewerything is cool with that no words for that,

they have like 1 of them

not many chapters of fight sequences that i didnt skip, usually they are boring or lacking a swift peace as a fight should have, but this one is good, satisfying, not the best one that ive read but for sure we can see progres from author as the story goes, hopefully it will gets even better. keep it up author