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2018-06-26 03:41

1 star. Total garbage. 1.- Total garbage of grammar. 2.- Butchered the timeline of Naruto, the author doesn't even research before writing the story it seems. 3.- Inconstancy of the system. 1 million points for a complete Uchiha bloodline, but if you have a tiny bit of it 3000 points is enough to give it to you. Doesn't even makes sense. 4.- Less than 500 words per chapter, what kind of crap is that?

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