I rather enjoy this story. Its more of a slow burn in terms of pacing, which can understandably be a bit frustrating. I'm actually not a super big fan of the actiony bits where Ves gets personally involved, but I understand their importance within the context of the story. I started reading this story because I was looking for something a bit more relaxed compared to the normal fare that I read. The MC often has many conflicting goals so it often feels like he's dragging his feet a bit, but I don't necessarily think that's a bad thing. I don't believe its ever been stated that Ves is a super driven person, so bouts of procrastination aren't uncommon and serve to make him seem more realistic. I don't think said dragging of feet has ever been particularly egregious, but at the same time I binged 350+ of the chapters at once so my perspective may be a bit skewed as a result. Since I've caught up to the most recent chapters, the story's been updating at a pace of two per day, so I think the updating pace is pretty stable. I think the supporting cast is fine, but the story is definitely very focused on Ves himself. We know the names of other characters and a bit of their backstories/motivations, but we don't go super in depth about them. I would say this is an area that could be improved upon, but not something that really detracts from the overall quality of the story itself. As for the World Background, we've been given glimpses into the universe as a whole outside of the small bubble the story's been primarily focused on. As a result, we know there is a greater universe with other planets/characters/aliens out there waiting to be explored. From my recollection, I don't believe there's been too many lore dumps. As things become relevant, Ves (and we as readers) learn more about them, but never really to a truly overwhelming extent. All in all, I think this is a fun story that's trying to be a bit different from the normal fare on this site. From that context, I believe the story I've given is fair. There's room for improvement, but nothing that detracts significantly from its overall quality. I think if you enjoy Superstars of Tomorrow this will be something you might enjoy as well.
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LIKEBut still the mc is super lame like literally everyone can take super advantage of him. He doesn't have a background to even stand tall. He has a system but he is still super average compare to other . I will still read it but still the most that anger me is how he earns dp . Come on he can earn dp by deploying enough mech design to iron sprit .
Shadewind:But still the mc is super lame like literally everyone can take super advantage of him. He doesn't have a background to even stand tall. He has a system but he is still super average compare to other . I will still read it but still the most that anger me is how he earns dp . Come on he can earn dp by deploying enough mech design to iron sprit .
QeaceTheImmortal:literally everything in this reply is no longer true XD
I mean that at the current part of the story for quite a while now shadowins comments are no longer true its called character development and growth sure he is that way in the beginning but so are almost all mcs in the beginning
No_Reading_No_Life:Hello. Could you explain what you mean? Was the novel rewritten or edited?
QeaceTheImmortal:I mean that at the current part of the story for quite a while now shadowins comments are no longer true its called character development and growth sure he is that way in the beginning but so are almost all mcs in the beginning
so to put it simply at the current point in the story not a single word of his comment is true any longer... wether it be about the system how he earns dp or him being average all of these statements are no longer true
No_Reading_No_Life:Hello. Could you explain what you mean? Was the novel rewritten or edited?