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Roktah
RoktahLv156yr
2018-07-11 18:04

the story is quite good, there is nothing special about the characters, world background very little but ok for the 19 chapters i read, i know what i need to. the grammer is horrible though, it makes for a bad reading experience. not the worst grammer i've seen but too many mistakes in a chapter to try and have you correct them. you need an editor. once you've straightened out your grammer, it will become way more popular.

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Roktah
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the mc is a little too dumb though, how many times is he going to forget to turn off his luck? its not really a thing people would forget to do. why does he not use his skill points and attribute points the moment he gets the chance to do so? every point, every skill increase, increases his survivabilty. his solution, lets first go home through this dangerous area and use my points only when i enter a fight i can't handle? it takes only a few minutes to allocate his points, not hours! he has a ton of points and gets more every lvl up he does`nt have to worry about using too many either.

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Noted. Thanks for the suggestion and read my novel.

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