THIS IS A YAOI/BL STORY SO YOU'VE BEEN WARNED! This is a hidden gem! Fast update ✓ Long chapter ✓ Good garmmar ✓ Comedy ✓ Handsome men ✓ Obsess, narcissistic BF ✓ Cringey love confession ✓ Overprotective father ✓ The story takes place in a cultivation world and focuses on romance and kind of slice of life genre with a touch of comedy. The MC, Qiu Ling, the dragons' leader, decided to decends to the mortal realm to assist his lover (the crown prince) with his trial secretly. As the gods need to pass the trials to temper themselves, they will spend a lifetime of misery as a mortal with no memory of the heaven. With the MC tempering with the fate written by the god in heaven, everything turns into chaos! The Fate God had to rewrite the crown prince's fate again and again not knowing where things got wrong. The plot is very interesting, a bit like 'Seven Unfortunate Lifetimes, All Thanks to a Single Moment of Impulse'. Its very funny as our narcissistic dragon try to prevent any potential love rival from approaching the still-a-kid ML by all means. PS: the story contains a few filler chapters here and there. No NSFW scene so far. The backstory of how the MC and ML got together is revealed eventually at later chapter.

What a terrible fate he has! Lol... can't wait to see their progress. The dragon king obviously won't let the MC to suffer alone... conclusion : add to library is a must! 5star

I'm so glad that I've found this hidden gem it really has potential to be in top 20! If you're looking for Yaoi/ BL novel with a male protagonist set in cultivation world, this is essentially what you're looking for. There are not any spicy scenes (that are described in detail) so far but I guess that's what makes it unique in in it's own way. There is mix of characters and personalities I give to all of them rating 10/10 (even guards in the bush get from me 10/10 🤭 🤫🤭). WELL NOW GO AND GIVE IT A GO IT'S WORTH IT!

This is a pretty decent story, but there is one big issue in my point of view. The story doesn’t have a true protagonist. (Maybe very minor spoilers) First off the crown prince Jingyi, he is still a child and one that has no memories of his previous life and is extremely gullible and a bit dumb. But that is to be expected of a normal mortal child. It’s pretty easy to lie to children and stuff like that. Thus he is not the main character. Second is the Dragon King, he seems like a male lead type character, and once again, not a main character or protagonist. He came down to the mortal world to help his lover’s trial. He is often obsessive and quite annoying in a sort of lovable way. He doesn’t really fall into the main character category. The issue is that while the first 50 chapter were enjoyable, I was getting bored. You started introducing more characters or making some characters grow more of a personality. There still wasn’t really a central character that really completed the story. I have read up to chapter 137 and have found myself often skimming chapters more and more. I even started skipping a chapter or two because I was so bored or annoyed. This is a romance story, but it’s very one sided. How is a story that is about two lovers, but have only one. It was funny at first that Jingyi was a baby and everything. But it became just a one sided love. That makes the BL aspect of this story feeling like it dragged. This story seems more like a comedy, rather than a BL story. The comedy is becoming recycled or at least very dragged out. It’s been 137 chapters and no BL... I’m not asking for explicit content or anything, just some progress, cause 0 seems to have happened. The real plot, aka the BL, hasn’t even started. When you think about it, once he dies and regains his memory, all this that happened, really won’t mean much in the end because of the information you provided about Jingyi’s previous life. Honestly, what I’m trying to say is, the story is getting boring. This is a BL story, but it seems that we have to settle with an young child and an obsessive lover from the previous life. (Totally not creepy). Please either move the plot faster or start some different ideas to change up the story please!?

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What I really like about this is that it has different characters and the plot is amazing and exciting. It may drag too long but the wait is worth it. And the story is original, you will be hooked with every twist of events. You will be suspicious while reading and then some issues will be clarified after some chapters. Lastly the author is so nice. You can just post what question or comment you have in mind and she will get back to you.

This is one of my most favorite stories I've read, including here, in Novelupdates, or other western novels. This story is refreshingly witty without being overdone, with an appropriate amount of world building and character development. The characters are diverse and each one unique in their personalities and skills; even the side characters are very memorable. We not only see the story of Qiu Ling and Jing He (or Jing Yi, as his mortal form is called) but also of many other characters, all of which is woven together into a fun and coherent whole. The arcs are distinctly separated based on various stages in Jing Yi's life, and we see how Qiu Ling accompanies him while hiding or out in the open, and the various ways Qiu Ling inadvertently thwarts and frustrates the Fate's Scribe, Shun Tao, as he attempts to write out a proper trial for is crown prince. The story is hilarious and light-hearted with tons of fluff between the main characters. I love how the relationship developed between them. Jing Yi's initial reaction to Qiu Ling was very believable, and the way he decided to give Qiu Ling his all without much fuss after accepting him was very satisfying. I love how in both his lives Jing Yi's steadiness and stability perfectly balance Qiu Ling's enthusiasm and troublemaking. I love how serious they both are about each other and how they both complement and bolster each other's strengths and weaknesses. I love how, despite it being a light-hearted story 90% of the time, we still get to see proper character development and the darker sides of a few characters. And as always, seeing Qiu Ling's unique take on everything and his exceedingly funny way of interacting with other characters (especially his mother-in-laws in both the worlds) makes everything so much more better. I'm very thankful that Qiu Ling, though excessively jealous and irresponsible sometimes, supports and encourages Jing Yi in every way he needs, never crossing the line with his forcefulness or pushing the boundaries of what is acceptable. All in all, this is definitely worth the read. I'm very thankful for the Author having crafted this wonderful story that is both written nicely and that is also updated so regularly and consistently. I will forever thank my lucky stars for having stumbles upon this.

Oh my gosh, how can I even express me love for this novel? 😍😍😍 This has got to be my new favorite! It's just so freaking cute!!! Ah, in my opinion everything about it is good, from the writing to the characters and plot, It's all done very well. As soon as I finished the first chapter I was hooked. I immediately binge read the whole thing. Seriously, as long as you don't mind bl, I highly recommend this sweet novel to anyone and everyone. The one and only fault I can pick is that the author sometimes uses too many commas in a sentence, but compared to how awesome the book is, what's something as minor as that? Actually, this book is probably the most well written original novel I've seen on the site so far. I'm so excited to see how things develop between the main character's and the rest of the cast, and I really can't wait for more chapters! Thanks for the hard work yansusustories!

I am one of those who doesn't patronize reading yaoi but this one definitely got me interested. Funny and light, easy for me to take in. The plot and the characters are well-constructed that in every twist and thwart would made you cry in anticipation and want more.

I haven’t really read the book, so this isn’t very accurate, but this is my take so far. This is a great book! It’s not really my type of story, but he writing is good and the plot is original and interesting. I would recommend giving it a try. Also, I’m assuming the writing speed is fast by what the description says and the number of chapters out. ❤️❤️❤️