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2019-03-04 13:07

I am one of those who doesn't patronize reading yaoi but this one definitely got me interested. Funny and light, easy for me to take in. The plot and the characters are well-constructed that in every twist and thwart would made you cry in anticipation and want more.

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Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv14

This is a pretty decent story, but there is one big issue in my point of view. The story doesn’t have a true protagonist. (Maybe very minor spoilers) First off the crown prince Jingyi, he is still a child and one that has no memories of his previous life and is extremely gullible and a bit dumb. But that is to be expected of a normal mortal child. It’s pretty easy to lie to children and stuff like that. Thus he is not the main character. Second is the Dragon King, he seems like a male lead type character, and once again, not a main character or protagonist. He came down to the mortal world to help his lover’s trial. He is often obsessive and quite annoying in a sort of lovable way. He doesn’t really fall into the main character category. The issue is that while the first 50 chapter were enjoyable, I was getting bored. You started introducing more characters or making some characters grow more of a personality. There still wasn’t really a central character that really completed the story. I have read up to chapter 137 and have found myself often skimming chapters more and more. I even started skipping a chapter or two because I was so bored or annoyed. This is a romance story, but it’s very one sided. How is a story that is about two lovers, but have only one. It was funny at first that Jingyi was a baby and everything. But it became just a one sided love. That makes the BL aspect of this story feeling like it dragged. This story seems more like a comedy, rather than a BL story. The comedy is becoming recycled or at least very dragged out. It’s been 137 chapters and no BL... I’m not asking for explicit content or anything, just some progress, cause 0 seems to have happened. The real plot, aka the BL, hasn’t even started. When you think about it, once he dies and regains his memory, all this that happened, really won’t mean much in the end because of the information you provided about Jingyi’s previous life. Honestly, what I’m trying to say is, the story is getting boring. This is a BL story, but it seems that we have to settle with an young child and an obsessive lover from the previous life. (Totally not creepy). Please either move the plot faster or start some different ideas to change up the story please!?

SulphurShip
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crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationLv6

This is one of my most favorite stories I've read, including here, in Novelupdates, or other western novels. This story is refreshingly witty without being overdone, with an appropriate amount of world building and character development. The characters are diverse and each one unique in their personalities and skills; even the side characters are very memorable. We not only see the story of Qiu Ling and Jing He (or Jing Yi, as his mortal form is called) but also of many other characters, all of which is woven together into a fun and coherent whole. The arcs are distinctly separated based on various stages in Jing Yi's life, and we see how Qiu Ling accompanies him while hiding or out in the open, and the various ways Qiu Ling inadvertently thwarts and frustrates the Fate's Scribe, Shun Tao, as he attempts to write out a proper trial for is crown prince. The story is hilarious and light-hearted with tons of fluff between the main characters. I love how the relationship developed between them. Jing Yi's initial reaction to Qiu Ling was very believable, and the way he decided to give Qiu Ling his all without much fuss after accepting him was very satisfying. I love how in both his lives Jing Yi's steadiness and stability perfectly balance Qiu Ling's enthusiasm and troublemaking. I love how serious they both are about each other and how they both complement and bolster each other's strengths and weaknesses. I love how, despite it being a light-hearted story 90% of the time, we still get to see proper character development and the darker sides of a few characters. And as always, seeing Qiu Ling's unique take on everything and his exceedingly funny way of interacting with other characters (especially his mother-in-laws in both the worlds) makes everything so much more better. I'm very thankful that Qiu Ling, though excessively jealous and irresponsible sometimes, supports and encourages Jing Yi in every way he needs, never crossing the line with his forcefulness or pushing the boundaries of what is acceptable. All in all, this is definitely worth the read. I'm very thankful for the Author having crafted this wonderful story that is both written nicely and that is also updated so regularly and consistently. I will forever thank my lucky stars for having stumbles upon this.

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