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PineHeinKyaw
PineHeinKyawLv106yr
2018-05-08 11:49

this is great one for onepiece fun-fiction i hope u all like it dakingfvoianwgoinWGIOnAOIGNoilANMgoiamzoikwgawfawsfafagfvagWFFWafwsFWSGFhbedhbzh

The Gamer Fruit

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4.3
23 Chs

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yu_now
yu_nowLv5

ok nice plot and good imagination. Its started to get interesting, but why is chapters length got shorter and shorter plz note it and make it a stander length chap next time and correct the chap no and title of 8 and 9 chap

6yr

Luft_Rauser
Luft_RauserLv7

Well, if it a one piece story line. Dont crashing it down with the main plotod one piece, like some novel dat put bleach power at one piece world. He literally killed some luffy exp, so I hope he'll be like "im passing just to get some ketchup"

6yr
SPECTRALE
SPECTRALELv5

the story so far(chap 7) seems interesting, i like it and would like for the mc to work independently from the strawhats, like make him have his own crew, give some quest to find the one piece, and don't give him a lot of devil fruit they are rare, like extremely rare, maybe every 50 to 100 chapters he by chance or plunder whatever, finds one, but not always get it's power, also i seemed to notice that you rushed the last chapters, the event were going so fast,so slow down a little, another point is that he is wasting his stat point while he could train for them, your story is great by the way keep on working

6yr
Luft_Rauser
Luft_RauserLv7

TRUCK SAMA KITAAAA!!!!!!! Beep beep!!! *vrroooommmmm* _____________________________________________________________________________________-____________-___________________

6yr
idontcareiloveit
idontcareiloveitLv5

The gamer manga ... gasp vant believe its about this go han jihan Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 140....... 140....... 140....... 140....... 140....... 140.......

6yr
Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1

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9mth
RPGrinders
RPGrindersLv6

Even though your novel is ***** and immature, yet I find the the story is actually good... Well, for my worries, don't slaughter the original one piece... But I don't mind if there is changes that isn't too drastic... well, anyway, peace out...

6yr
thedarkknight
thedarkknightLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Plutonium
PlutoniumLv6

The story can be written and found everywhere there is person with bit of imagination. I support this story but characters and writing style is a novice level. I can read properly, don't know who is talking, what's his motive. Everything is just like it happens and we just accept it as it is.

6yr
LikelyLucky
LikelyLuckyLv14

Reveal spoiler

6yr
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