the story so far(chap 7) seems interesting, i like it and would like for the mc to work independently from the strawhats, like make him have his own crew, give some quest to find the one piece, and don't give him a lot of devil fruit they are rare, like extremely rare, maybe every 50 to 100 chapters he by chance or plunder whatever, finds one, but not always get it's power, also i seemed to notice that you rushed the last chapters, the event were going so fast,so slow down a little, another point is that he is wasting his stat point while he could train for them, your story is great by the way keep on working
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your suggestion is very boring please don’t influence the author he’s a gamer so he should have multiple abilities to make him well rounded & devil fruits aren’t rare good ones are but since he’s a gamer he can take the tradh and develope it .
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indeed a gamer could have a lot of skills but does he have enough time to develope them all, the answer is obviously no, and if ordinary devil fruit are not rare, if there is ordinary D-fruits cause there is none everyone of them is unique and you can't find two that are the same, so back to point if there realy are ordinary D-fruit then all of the white, red and beast pirates ect.. should have one, but no only elites of these crews have D-fruit which destroys your argumant plus you mentionned that i am trying to inflence the author, the answer is yes, and it is called guiding i want him to make something original unlike the mainstream fanfictions where they just copy the original script and follow the adventure with changing some thing here and there, so no originality, and also if the mc is good at everything then what is the point of reading a novel, the mc should grow as the story goes on, not get op in around 10 CHAPS, well thats all for now
first i would like to say the novel already at 19 chapters 😄 second there’s strong devil fruits then there’s weak = ordinary & extraordinary 😇 and your right the author already has the not growing to fast set in stone he can only get new df’s at every 50 wis upgrade & he has to find them 😏😁 & another thing if you have read the gamer you’d know that the mc of this novel’s to weak to compare in skills or level speed , even in wealth & treasures 😩(sigh) you can’t please everyone.
ooh 😮 and i forgot to add the gamer can & does gave enough time to level everything in a balanced way because he can create a dungeon with excel’d time 😅 you should read more & research before you try to “ guide “ someone.
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and you should blame oda for them not having enough because he didn’t bother to invent them under the guise of there needs to be some swimmers in a crew. 😁
the point is that this is an original so the author is triying to spice things up in his own, to make his own work, and a fanfiction because he just took the general idea as a base and not to follow the gamer and one piece litterally otherwise it will be boring
