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hosfahim
hosfahimLv56yr
2018-06-02 03:46

Ever wonder why in almost all xianxia novels there seems to be only one ethnic group or skin color amongst humans (A.K.A everybody in the universe is a Chinese and has a Chinese name)? Really nigga? I mean where are dem Browns, dem Blacks? Also how come all hot chicks are described as white, fair-skinned, like jade? Where them ebony chicks? Well in this novel, there are Whites, Yellows (japanese-like) and Blacks. That's right, you read correctly, Blacks! And the Blacks got the strongest empire and the other empires are pitiful in comparison. How come you ask? Well, literally cuz of Black power. Seriously, Blacks have a special power.

Conclave of Tyrants

theonionjunktion
4.4
82 Chs

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theonionjunktion
theonionjunktionAuthor

This is without a doubt my favourite review. Well said bro

6yr
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Zenith97
Zenith97Lv13

Ebony is JUSTICE!!!!!!

6yr
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DanteDiablos
DanteDiablosLv5

Its weird right? Even when the authors not of asian ethnicity the MCs are almost ALWAYS Chinese lol Im like 'Why the **** is the MC chinese?! Your not even Asian author!' Its funny

6yr
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CathAkira
CathAkiraLv4

I find this review extremely funny yet accurate.

6yr
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wasneverher
wasneverherLv2

brother you did us proud

6yr
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hosfahim
hosfahimLv5

haha no problem. I am not even Black though. You could say that I am brown (Bangladeshi descent).

wasneverher:brother you did us proud
6yr
Grass_Porridge
Grass_PorridgeLv4

My friend, I have not laughed like I have when I read your review in over a month. Thank you.

6yr
1
hosfahim
hosfahimLv5

You're welcome

Grass_Porridge:My friend, I have not laughed like I have when I read your review in over a month. Thank you.
6yr
PrimordialBaobab
PrimordialBaobabLv5

You mad cuz XD

6yr
daodaodaodao1111
daodaodaodao1111Lv4

EBONY IS BBC!!!!!! BIG BLACK CROWN

6yr
3
MistofOblivion
MistofOblivionLv7

I thought about it and here's my conclusion 1.Making different ethnic groups means having to give different types of names. Authors are too lazy to do it 2. About girls- it's their own preferences 3. They are posting their novels in a site which originated in China 4 most common reason- we all are fan of old days wuxia or xianxia or other kind of Eastern fantasy novels. So Chinese name sounds kinda cool?

DanteDiablos:Its weird right? Even when the authors not of asian ethnicity the MCs are almost ALWAYS Chinese lol Im like 'Why the **** is the MC chinese?! Your not even Asian author!' Its funny
6yr
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Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv15

I maybe the man is talking about how people who are not Chinese make Chinese cultivation novels. Why can’t a American make a cultivation novel with all the races involved?

MistofOblivion:I thought about it and here's my conclusion 1.Making different ethnic groups means having to give different types of names. Authors are too lazy to do it 2. About girls- it's their own preferences 3. They are posting their novels in a site which originated in China 4 most common reason- we all are fan of old days wuxia or xianxia or other kind of Eastern fantasy novels. So Chinese name sounds kinda cool?
5yr
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SunForge
SunForgeLv4

lol

5yr
Nigga_Lzz
Nigga_LzzLv14

I was still debating on reading this. but because of this review I am definitely reading it.😂😂

3yr
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onematters
onemattersLv14

I Play bangalore on apex legends too 🤣🤣 lol jk im ethiopian pusshing cluture eskitit

hosfahim:haha no problem. I am not even Black though. You could say that I am brown (Bangladeshi descent).
3yr
UmissMe
UmissMeLv1

U don't know that chinese are very rasict. Its not ur fault since unlike america where everything is televised unlike In china where everything is strictly control by ccp.

DanteDiablos:Its weird right? Even when the authors not of asian ethnicity the MCs are almost ALWAYS Chinese lol Im like 'Why the **** is the MC chinese?! Your not even Asian author!' Its funny
2yr
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UmissMe
UmissMeLv1

Nigga_Lzz:I was still debating on reading this. but because of this review I am definitely reading it.😂😂
2yr
UmissMe
UmissMeLv1

So, basically like WAKANDA. WAKANDA FOREVER

2yr
1
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