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Iskandor
IskandorLv56yr
2019-04-20 18:11

This is amazing to say the least, for world building, I'd note vote at all because there isn't just world building, there's multiverse building. For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face. I'm jealous of this writing ability, I've wanted to write a few books but I don't have the talent some people do such as you Alemillach (I hope I got that right, it's such a cool and weird name though I don't have room to judge...) all in all Yale is the best protagonist I've seen in a novel thus far keep up the good work!

Last Wish System

Alemillach
4.4
645 Chs

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Alemillach
AlemillachAuthor

Thank you for the review!

6yr
5
zaramin
zaraminLv3

Tom's up

5yr
Plasma_J
Plasma_JLv4

Well said

5yr
1
Ali93
Ali93Lv14

Ok

5yr
lucfier
lucfierLv12

Good

5yr
EpicPs
EpicPsLv10

hi, could you please tell me which chapter noah meets the people he saw in the special realm again? or which chapter he meets swordmad... Please!

5yr
EpicPs
EpicPsLv10

hi, could you please tell me which chapter noah meets the people he saw in the special realm again? or which chapter he meets swordmad... Please!

5yr
KilLaRuNa
KilLaRuNaLv4

Oh yeah!!

5yr
Pandas12321
Pandas12321Lv3

you are brain damaged if you think this is a good novel. at chapter 20 so far and the writing is so fucking devoid of emotions. it's pure mechanical and without actual character interactions/dialogue. MC has no fucking personality because the author doesn't give him one. spends most of the chapters talking about the fucking system instead of actually establishing a setting and focusing on the actual story. there are countless grammatical errors and summarizing of events. in fact the whole story so far flows like a summary instead of a novel from someone's perspective. the writing ability of this worm is just pure ****. judging by your comment "For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face." I'm not surprised you're okay with his terrible writing ability. if you're **** at english, and writing in general just don't write and get a fkin translator. I love when brain damaged dropouts like you idolize and prop up some loser with no talent into someone great. only people who would like this story are those dumber than this brain deficient author.

5yr
3
Iskandor
IskandorLv5

Sure, the writing quality is fairly low at the beginning, sure, some of the ideas are unoriginal, sure, there is minimal conversation towards the beginning... but like all (rational) humans we improve, but the oy wat to improve is to practice. Not to mention that the novel has gone premium, to do so it needs to be confirmed by a money loving corporation, to become premium is basically saying "hey, my novel is a cash crop due to *insert various reasons*" Also, unlike cultivation novels this book doesnt go too extremely in depth with how it all works, some enjoy the science behind the magic such as myself but others don't (and I respect that but have to respectfully disagree)... If you have a problem with a novel you can simply drop it instead of badmouthing those who enjoy it, or give constructive criticism such as "The human interaction is a bit lacking, however if you give MC an event that makes him/her a little more outgoing I feel that it could fix the problem"

Pandas12321:you are brain damaged if you think this is a good novel. at chapter 20 so far and the writing is so fucking devoid of emotions. it's pure mechanical and without actual character interactions/dialogue. MC has no fucking personality because the author doesn't give him one. spends most of the chapters talking about the fucking system instead of actually establishing a setting and focusing on the actual story. there are countless grammatical errors and summarizing of events. in fact the whole story so far flows like a summary instead of a novel from someone's perspective. the writing ability of this worm is just pure ****. judging by your comment "For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face." I'm not surprised you're okay with his terrible writing ability. if you're **** at english, and writing in general just don't write and get a fkin translator. I love when brain damaged dropouts like you idolize and prop up some loser with no talent into someone great. only people who would like this story are those dumber than this brain deficient author.
5yr
5
lilleplutt06
lilleplutt06Lv3

True

5yr
ToronToron91
ToronToron91Lv14

You guys were very honest with your opinions and both have a point. Wish ppl wouldn't bash the authors with degrading words though 😒

Iskandor:Sure, the writing quality is fairly low at the beginning, sure, some of the ideas are unoriginal, sure, there is minimal conversation towards the beginning... but like all (rational) humans we improve, but the oy wat to improve is to practice. Not to mention that the novel has gone premium, to do so it needs to be confirmed by a money loving corporation, to become premium is basically saying "hey, my novel is a cash crop due to *insert various reasons*" Also, unlike cultivation novels this book doesnt go too extremely in depth with how it all works, some enjoy the science behind the magic such as myself but others don't (and I respect that but have to respectfully disagree)... If you have a problem with a novel you can simply drop it instead of badmouthing those who enjoy it, or give constructive criticism such as "The human interaction is a bit lacking, however if you give MC an event that makes him/her a little more outgoing I feel that it could fix the problem"
4yr
4
TheEnthraller
TheEnthrallerLv4

I like your reply You should read Brandon Sanderson I like reading new stuff which authors on this platform haven't done before I liked the plague doctor but it didn't get selected Don't know why I told you last bit but whatever

Iskandor:Sure, the writing quality is fairly low at the beginning, sure, some of the ideas are unoriginal, sure, there is minimal conversation towards the beginning... but like all (rational) humans we improve, but the oy wat to improve is to practice. Not to mention that the novel has gone premium, to do so it needs to be confirmed by a money loving corporation, to become premium is basically saying "hey, my novel is a cash crop due to *insert various reasons*" Also, unlike cultivation novels this book doesnt go too extremely in depth with how it all works, some enjoy the science behind the magic such as myself but others don't (and I respect that but have to respectfully disagree)... If you have a problem with a novel you can simply drop it instead of badmouthing those who enjoy it, or give constructive criticism such as "The human interaction is a bit lacking, however if you give MC an event that makes him/her a little more outgoing I feel that it could fix the problem"
4yr
2
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LadyTass2001
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The story starts off with a kid named Yale in a small clan, he "inherits" a system. The Last Wish System. His mother is dead, his father disdain's his existence, his sister is sent off to an academy. Welcome to Yale's world. As he grows and becomes a man he meets friends,family he never knew, and becomes a brother.... to a wolf. The story is told naturally through his eyes, as he adventures through his life we get to see and understand how his world, his universe, his story grows and expand. Come join in the world of Yale and his Last Wish System.

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TheSilverQuill
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I have to give credit where credit is deserved. Well done Alemillach!! You've grinded out chapters nonstop no matter the circumstances and delivered the same great quality throughout all 500 chapters thus far. YOU'RE AWESOME!!! You deserve more credit and more readers. Honestly, I started reading LWS before it had 100 chapters and it's now one of the only 2 webnovels that I follow daily. You're amazing. You've seriously done an great job with the story and taken it in ways that I didn't see coming, yet kept it just as interesting as my first time reading. You inspire me bro, I want you to know that. If you ever want to talk to another author hit me up. I know it helps me when I'm in a writer's rut.

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FairyJiao_jiao
FairyJiao_jiaoLv11

Just finished reading the chapters and I actually like it. I like the main character and cant wait to see his improvement, how he will become strong and slap it to his father's face hahaha. Since I'm also a gamer I like the game system added in the story feels like I'm reading a story about a character in ragna. I can't wait for the lateat update. More update please!!!!

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yadie
yadieLv11

This is one of the best I've seen so far . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ... Only reason I wrote this review is because the book was that good!!!!!

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VEGEKU
VEGEKULv6

Well, I write my first review on Original Novels on this novel I Rate 5 because it truly deserve that . Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. more than 99% of them have Grammar and spelling problem in a terrible way. But this novel is truly good, not only Story is great and character design is good even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two problem. Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. The Only flaw of it is the Updated Release that is slightly weak and this is the reason of low ranking of novel but inn my opinion the quality is more important that quantity. So our good fellow Brothers read this novel and vote for it maybe Author release more.

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yu_now
yu_nowLv5

well only read 1st chapter its a novel whose mc has a system like name of novel but system is diferent from other system that i read all in all only read one chapter cant tell whats happen next but interesting start

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Seven_Nights_soul
Seven_Nights_soulLv4

It's good to read. Best original book I seem to have read for now, and hopefully will still continue to do so. I'd be all in it if he become very powerful(op) and versatile.

7yr
NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Awesome story to my liking !! Keep updating sensei !! 5 star and my daily spirit stones will be yours ...........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7yr
FBC1337
FBC1337Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

We need daily updates !!! A bit filler is ok too !! .............. ................... .... .. .............,...,,........ ..........

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