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NewNEET
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2018-05-06 01:57

We need daily updates !!! A bit filler is ok too !! .............. ................... .... .. .............,...,,........ ..........

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Alemillach
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Thank you for the review. With my work irl I don't have time to write more, it would be solved if some things related to extra hours in my work changed a bit...

NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Sigh.. I'm too greedy afterall.. Its rare too find a good original.. Just hope its not drop mid way..

BlackSwan_20
BlackSwan_20Lv3

I joined this contest not for prize and fame but to improve my self in the field of writing AND TO REACH MORE READERS MLBB: LOVE UNTOLD ON #115 NEEDS YOUR REVIEW I WILL ACCEPT NEGATIVE REVIEWS IF IT IS FOR MY IMPROVEMENT. THANKS

BlackSwan_20
BlackSwan_20Lv3

I joined this contest not for prize and fame but to improve my self in the field of writing AND TO REACH MORE READERS MLBB: LOVE UNTOLD ON #115 NEEDS YOUR REVIEW I WILL ACCEPT NEGATIVE REVIEWS IF IT IS FOR MY IMPROVEMENT. THANKS

NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Wtf? Are u ok dude?

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