Well, I write my first review on Original Novels on this novel I Rate 5 because it truly deserve that . Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. more than 99% of them have Grammar and spelling problem in a terrible way. But this novel is truly good, not only Story is great and character design is good even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two problem. Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. The Only flaw of it is the Updated Release that is slightly weak and this is the reason of low ranking of novel but inn my opinion the quality is more important that quantity. So our good fellow Brothers read this novel and vote for it maybe Author release more.
Liked by 63 people
LIKE
Thank you for the review!
Well actually not really low. Number of words per chapter in LWS is similar to that translated novel.
Yes, and it's getting better
Page:Well actually not really low. Number of words per chapter in LWS is similar to that translated novel.
Sry but I honestly can't agree with you. I have now read a few other Original Novels as well, and 1. your Claim that 99% of the Rest are poorly written is baseless. I must add that this Novel isn't any better and maybe a little worse in the Style/grammar aspect. I have only read Till chapter 7, and I don't want to continue Cause MC and the System is too unbalanced for my Taste. Really don't know why it is ranked 2 lol, it isn't Bad but character Design? Age 6 and already as Wise as some *****, Well that's typical CN Theme I guess :) I get that you are excited but please a proper review should also have proper Arguments. I also Hope someone can give me a good summary of what happens after c7 otherwise I really don't understand the Hype
As Wise as some a.d.u.l.t
FleetingClouds:Sry but I honestly can't agree with you. I have now read a few other Original Novels as well, and 1. your Claim that 99% of the Rest are poorly written is baseless. I must add that this Novel isn't any better and maybe a little worse in the Style/grammar aspect. I have only read Till chapter 7, and I don't want to continue Cause MC and the System is too unbalanced for my Taste. Really don't know why it is ranked 2 lol, it isn't Bad but character Design? Age 6 and already as Wise as some *****, Well that's typical CN Theme I guess :) I get that you are excited but please a proper review should also have proper Arguments. I also Hope someone can give me a good summary of what happens after c7 otherwise I really don't understand the Hype
Sorry Friend, But i also ccan't agree with what you say, my claim of 99% of other novels is base on spelling and grammar problems that truly is terrible BUT this novel we can't see that situation and if you read carefully i Said ALMOST no problem not that there is none. Story is creative and if you read you can truly forgot that you are reading a original novel. Wise MC ans .... is the usual theme for LN and WN so it doesn't have any problem and character design is rather good you see a good sister a terrible father a terrible clan and in academy now to this point we have many characters with unique background that we barely see in any other original and their numbers is less than 10 till now. That review that i right was to the latest chapter of that time that was chapter 7 and at that time the novel wasn't even in ranking so i write purely my opinion . I'm up to last chapter now if you want i can write a review to last chapter for you , I must tell you that story is developing wonderful.
FleetingClouds:Sry but I honestly can't agree with you. I have now read a few other Original Novels as well, and 1. your Claim that 99% of the Rest are poorly written is baseless. I must add that this Novel isn't any better and maybe a little worse in the Style/grammar aspect. I have only read Till chapter 7, and I don't want to continue Cause MC and the System is too unbalanced for my Taste. Really don't know why it is ranked 2 lol, it isn't Bad but character Design? Age 6 and already as Wise as some *****, Well that's typical CN Theme I guess :) I get that you are excited but please a proper review should also have proper Arguments. I also Hope someone can give me a good summary of what happens after c7 otherwise I really don't understand the Hype
Please do if you can, I am interested to See if it really gets better. But almost?! Till c7, my Problem is Not mispelling of words, but Just the structure of some sentences or Missing words. But that I can also overlook. If you still believe in your 99%, then so be it. What I didn't like was that He could Change his innate Talent to perfect or High Grade, or that his archery was so good from the getgo, is Talent and Training even something Worth in this World when even a 6 year Old child can transform into a super disciple with perfect stats after some Tasks? Are medicinal pills growing like cabagges? Sry, it might be his First Project and it is indeed quite good, but it feels like MC is having it too easy. Ignorant father? Cold hearted clan? Nice sister? Not expressed Well enough to get my sympathy. Haven't been to the Academy yet, so please do enlighten me, I srsly want to know why it is so highly regarded. It is Not Bad!, But to me it doesn't feel that Original either. No dis, Just Personal opinion ;)
VEGEKU:Sorry Friend, But i also ccan't agree with what you say, my claim of 99% of other novels is base on spelling and grammar problems that truly is terrible BUT this novel we can't see that situation and if you read carefully i Said ALMOST no problem not that there is none. Story is creative and if you read you can truly forgot that you are reading a original novel. Wise MC ans .... is the usual theme for LN and WN so it doesn't have any problem and character design is rather good you see a good sister a terrible father a terrible clan and in academy now to this point we have many characters with unique background that we barely see in any other original and their numbers is less than 10 till now. That review that i right was to the latest chapter of that time that was chapter 7 and at that time the novel wasn't even in ranking so i write purely my opinion . I'm up to last chapter now if you want i can write a review to last chapter for you , I must tell you that story is developing wonderful.
Friend I don't know but i feel that you have a personal Grudge with this novel or it's Author, maybe your novel or your friend novel has its Ranking lost and you behave this way but let it be i reply to your questions. That was 17 not 7 in that time last chapter was 17 and i write the review that you must consider the review is for more than 2 week ago my friend at that time story wasn't in high ranking and I'm just a reader. My friend Did you read any novel to this time? See MC of our novels are all this way they each have their cheats or gifts or opportunities in the novel for example "The Strongest System" "Shadow Hack" "Ultimate Scheming system" and very other novels. Second point i must say is that some MC are lucky some are hardworking like "Immortal Mortal" so this is Author's Choice not i or you.and nearly all of the original novels that there are now releasing are from new Author and Pay attention that i Said Nearly not all and all of the readers now that there are problems in some points. For the last part MC is truly trying hard even if he has system and cheats and it's not a lazy person or a shallow one so he's have credit to be our MC. in the training season that he will survived he Will be matured and story will ascend in quality also in the academy till now we see different characters and point and also good chapters.I think that it'll be a good story but this is to this chapter if novel has regression in the future so may be it i don't own it.
FleetingClouds:Please do if you can, I am interested to See if it really gets better. But almost?! Till c7, my Problem is Not mispelling of words, but Just the structure of some sentences or Missing words. But that I can also overlook. If you still believe in your 99%, then so be it. What I didn't like was that He could Change his innate Talent to perfect or High Grade, or that his archery was so good from the getgo, is Talent and Training even something Worth in this World when even a 6 year Old child can transform into a super disciple with perfect stats after some Tasks? Are medicinal pills growing like cabagges? Sry, it might be his First Project and it is indeed quite good, but it feels like MC is having it too easy. Ignorant father? Cold hearted clan? Nice sister? Not expressed Well enough to get my sympathy. Haven't been to the Academy yet, so please do enlighten me, I srsly want to know why it is so highly regarded. It is Not Bad!, But to me it doesn't feel that Original either. No dis, Just Personal opinion ;)
Sry, I guess after Reading Tons of These novels, I have Developed a resistent against generic themes. Coincedentally, Shadow Hack is One of the novels I dropped after ~100 or so chapters because I MC was too stupid, OP, and had No competition. I have No Personal grudge, hehe, I am honestly curious and will skim through to latest chapters and See how it goes. I am aware that there are often Systems available, but I do think that the quality of the Systems can be differentiated. I will No longer bother you. Have a nice Day and eat a Cookie ;)
VEGEKU:Friend I don't know but i feel that you have a personal Grudge with this novel or it's Author, maybe your novel or your friend novel has its Ranking lost and you behave this way but let it be i reply to your questions. That was 17 not 7 in that time last chapter was 17 and i write the review that you must consider the review is for more than 2 week ago my friend at that time story wasn't in high ranking and I'm just a reader. My friend Did you read any novel to this time? See MC of our novels are all this way they each have their cheats or gifts or opportunities in the novel for example "The Strongest System" "Shadow Hack" "Ultimate Scheming system" and very other novels. Second point i must say is that some MC are lucky some are hardworking like "Immortal Mortal" so this is Author's Choice not i or you.and nearly all of the original novels that there are now releasing are from new Author and Pay attention that i Said Nearly not all and all of the readers now that there are problems in some points. For the last part MC is truly trying hard even if he has system and cheats and it's not a lazy person or a shallow one so he's have credit to be our MC. in the training season that he will survived he Will be matured and story will ascend in quality also in the academy till now we see different characters and point and also good chapters.I think that it'll be a good story but this is to this chapter if novel has regression in the future so may be it i don't own it.
No, it's nor bother and i like this type of Discuss I also don't like some types and genres so You can see that i reviewed a very low point to some novels everyone is different and you can like or hate any type of novel but if someone doesn't like some type this isn't the meaning that he/she goes and try to Damage that work of course i know you're not that type of person . This novel is in its early period and is too soon to say that it's good one or bad one . For example "Shadow Hack" now truly become exciting and MC and others went to main Earth! Thanks again for your attention
FleetingClouds:Sry, I guess after Reading Tons of These novels, I have Developed a resistent against generic themes. Coincedentally, Shadow Hack is One of the novels I dropped after ~100 or so chapters because I MC was too stupid, OP, and had No competition. I have No Personal grudge, hehe, I am honestly curious and will skim through to latest chapters and See how it goes. I am aware that there are often Systems available, but I do think that the quality of the Systems can be differentiated. I will No longer bother you. Have a nice Day and eat a Cookie ;)
I read till latest chapter and it got better from chapter 13 onwards. I wrote a Review, feel Free to read or comment if you want to :)
VEGEKU:No, it's nor bother and i like this type of Discuss I also don't like some types and genres so You can see that i reviewed a very low point to some novels everyone is different and you can like or hate any type of novel but if someone doesn't like some type this isn't the meaning that he/she goes and try to Damage that work of course i know you're not that type of person . This novel is in its early period and is too soon to say that it's good one or bad one . For example "Shadow Hack" now truly become exciting and MC and others went to main Earth! Thanks again for your attention
This novel has bad gramamur.. There are a lot of issues. Dun't like Vekuka-santapamanasdasdas
......
Agreed
Hopefully better grammar than yours...
That's definitely the case -_^
I have read the first few chapters and I can say that the spelling is good, but the grammar is not really that great as you proclaimed it to be. I have read other original novels that has a way better grammar than this. But the story, though cliche, is pretty good so far so I will continue reading this one.
No friend , in the time that i wrote this Review very very few novel had proper grammar so i said that in comparison to other novels of that time plus the grammar progress pretty good in this novel , in the recent chapters there is almost no problem.
Janera:I have read the first few chapters and I can say that the spelling is good, but the grammar is not really that great as you proclaimed it to be. I have read other original novels that has a way better grammar than this. But the story, though cliche, is pretty good so far so I will continue reading this one.
Good review
Come on...Please correct your grammar before pointing finger at others... Regards Your Well-wisher
