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Nightdrift
NightdriftLv66yr
2018-09-02 15:01

Well it's got potential but the author seriously needs an editor, an then needs to rewrite all the chapters, I don't know what qidian was thinking making it a premium book, it is nowhere near the quality that one would expect from a paid story. That being said if everything aligns then it could be. Just until it does expect very poor Grammer and spelling and terrible adjectives, it reads like a very poorly translated novel, except it is not translated, it is written in English. I truly hope the author does get his act together as I would enjoy reading it when he does.

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Alemillach
AlemillachAuthor

Thank you for the review! I asked for a pro editor a lot of times, I am not native and I see everything good hwen checking the chapter (word and grammarly premium also see it well), so unless I get native pro editor I can't correct more.

Nightdrift
NightdriftLv6

Well I hope you get that native editor soon, that is the most important determinator of whether your book succeeds or flops, good luck.

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