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2020-11-08 01:05

The mc is stupid as hell. He is gets mad at everyone for a good reason and then crawl back to them with an apology. He can't stick to his decisions. SPOILERS HERE:- He gets angry at his friends (blind faith in the village) hokage(manipulate him, could not control him, expelled him), and then comes back to them begging. He is just like a puppet for his friends. He decided that hidden villages, are not fair to take even malicious missions, so they need to be eradicated. Then he suddenly comes back, say sorry to everyone, gets hitched. He makes Minato come to life, he also betrayed the MC, he just don't care. he got too much power, didn't do anything special, just acts like a lapdog for his friends.

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