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UnrivaledSolicitorLv126yr
2018-04-15 14:05

I assume this is Fulcon? If not, than this is just straight up plagiarism. Especially considering the fact that Fulcon has up to 62 chapters on fanfiction.net. If this is Fulcon, then ignore everything I’ve just said and read this novel. It’s definitely one of the best Naruto SI out there. Fulcon does an especially great job of retaining all the characters personalities, a problem a lot of SI novels have.

SHINOBI: The RPG

Leylin_Farlier
4.2
93 Chs

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UnrivaledSolicitorLv12

Too lazy to rewrite my post but I’ve read up to chapter 62. Even though that’s only 37 from the current, ya gotta take into account how much longer an average chapter of this novel is. Most chapters are easily twice as long, while some even have like 5 times the normal amount. In other words, a lot of bang for ya buck.

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Leylin_FarlierAuthor

Most chapters are 4-5k words, with some going as high as 9k. The short chapters are at minimum 2.5k words. Thank you for commenting though. The chapters are being ported over slowly, I figured it was kinder to put a few chapters a day instead of rushing to get them all over at once, since the regular release speed is quite slow to most novel readers, especially those here. Might as well let them enjoy it slowly before they start complaining about the release speed.

UnrivaledSolicitor:Too lazy to rewrite my post but I’ve read up to chapter 62. Even though that’s only 37 from the current, ya gotta take into account how much longer an average chapter of this novel is. Most chapters are easily twice as long, while some even have like 5 times the normal amount. In other words, a lot of bang for ya buck.
6yr
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FulconLv2

No, Leylin is not me and he did not ask my permission to port this stuff over. Thanks for calling him out.

6yr
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UnrivaledSolicitorLv12

No problem. As soon as I saw the name Daisuke I thought something sounded way too familiar. Hopefully you can get this issue resolved.

Fulcon:No, Leylin is not me and he did not ask my permission to port this stuff over. Thanks for calling him out.
6yr
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FulconLv2

I gave him a deadline to give me credit for this story. If he fails, I'm reporting him.

UnrivaledSolicitor:No problem. As soon as I saw the name Daisuke I thought something sounded way too familiar. Hopefully you can get this issue resolved.
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PrehistoricDevilLv12

you should post this yourself and im sure he will delete this

Fulcon:I gave him a deadline to give me credit for this story. If he fails, I'm reporting him.
6yr
FulconLv2

I'm not on this website enough to justify that. I might start hosting the second act of this fanfic on this site when I actually get there, but that'll be a while.

PrehistoricDevil:you should post this yourself and im sure he will delete this
6yr
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Leylin_FarlierAuthor

Do be sure to contact me here, via replying to one of my posts, or using my FF account [ https://***.fanfiction.net/~thelordoforiginalsin ]. I can take down the story or simply edit the title to "SHINOBI: The RPG (Act/Arc/Part 1)". I can not simply transfer it under your name as no system is in place, or I would do that.

Fulcon:I'm not on this website enough to justify that. I might start hosting the second act of this fanfic on this site when I actually get there, but that'll be a while.
6yr
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PrehistoricDevilLv12

its your story and he did this to expose your great story so he will surely let u host this as you will be posting more.Qidian might put revenue option later on which might help u aswell so jump aboraod fast

Fulcon:I'm not on this website enough to justify that. I might start hosting the second act of this fanfic on this site when I actually get there, but that'll be a while.
6yr
FulconLv2

I don't want to directly earn money off of a fanfic. That'd be in violation of copy write.

PrehistoricDevil:its your story and he did this to expose your great story so he will surely let u host this as you will be posting more.Qidian might put revenue option later on which might help u aswell so jump aboraod fast
6yr
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PrehistoricDevilLv12

anyway host yourself

Fulcon:I don't want to directly earn money off of a fanfic. That'd be in violation of copy write.
6yr
LandUpGamingLv13

Can you recommend me some good SI for Naruto? Can be either on this site or others

6yr
UnrivaledSolicitorLv12

Sure they’re a couple that come to mind. My favorite is still this one but Clair/December Adventure Through the Elemental Nations isn’t bad. Can find it on Royal Road. Also Average Shinobi in the Naruto is the only one I read on QI. They’re probably many others but I that involves a deeper dive and naruto SI aren’t as a high priority for me atm.

6yr
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UnrivaledSolicitorLv12

Clair/Dexter*

UnrivaledSolicitor:Sure they’re a couple that come to mind. My favorite is still this one but Clair/December Adventure Through the Elemental Nations isn’t bad. Can find it on Royal Road. Also Average Shinobi in the Naruto is the only one I read on QI. They’re probably many others but I that involves a deeper dive and naruto SI aren’t as a high priority for me atm.
6yr
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AngelicDestroyerLv5

New chap.

Leylin_Farlier:Most chapters are 4-5k words, with some going as high as 9k. The short chapters are at minimum 2.5k words. Thank you for commenting though. The chapters are being ported over slowly, I figured it was kinder to put a few chapters a day instead of rushing to get them all over at once, since the regular release speed is quite slow to most novel readers, especially those here. Might as well let them enjoy it slowly before they start complaining about the release speed.
6yr
Yu_HiroLv5

Ah.......I haven't read that in a long time.......

UnrivaledSolicitor:Clair/Dexter*
5yr
Apocalypse_Lv6

Dude you definitely don't know me but I've been following your story on FFnet ever since you started uploading your chapters back in early 2018 or something. You're GREAT!

Fulcon:No, Leylin is not me and he did not ask my permission to port this stuff over. Thanks for calling him out.
4yr
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FulconLv2

Hello, my name is Fulcon, and I'm the original author of this fanfiction. I first posted this story on Spacebattles on March 11, 2016. You can read it here. h t t p s : / / forums . spacebattles . com / threads / shinobi - the - rpg - naruto - si . 380860 / If the link doesn't work, simply search for it on the forum. I posted it on FFnet nearly a year later. URL is this: h t t p s : / / w w w . fanfiction . net / s / 12433631 / 1 / SHINOBI - The - RPG I have worked for over two years on this story. It is currently 62 chapters in the making, so if you are in a real hurry to see what's going on in this story, I recommend heading over there and getting much, much further in the story. The reason I'm telling you about this is because I am not Leylin_Farlier, and my permission to post this story on another site was never sought at all. At best, this is merely an attempt to give the story more coverage. At worst, this is plagiarism. Given that this person has never once named me or attempted to give me credit, I can only assume it's the latter. That simply will not do. Leylin, I've put SHINOBI: The RPG on Hiatus for a few weeks. You have until then to put in the following changes to this story to give me proper credit - or you can take it down. Either is fine with me. #1: You are to write, in bold letters 'Story Written by Fulcon' at the bottom of this cover picture. #2: Change the description of the story to include 'Story Written by Fulcon'. #3: Change the author's thoughts at the end of each chapter too 'The Previous was a Fanbased Work of Fiction, written by Fulcon. Naruto is owned by Shueisha, Viz Entertainment and Masashi Kishimoto. Please support the Official Release.' Listen, Leylin. Uploading someone else's story to another site and claiming it as your own isn't cool. It's not funny, it's not going to get you any further in life, it's only going to end in public humiliation. At best. But if you make the changes that I requested, we can forget you attempted to steal anything and you can keep hosting my story. Because it is mine. And I'd appreciate it if you acknowledged that fact.

6yr
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EternalRestLv14

I will be the bad guy on the comments this time and say will the grammar is good everything else is terrible. The main character is the real deal breaker because he is one of the most retarded I have ever read about yet he is constantly talking up his intellect. The story it’s self will have lots of potential is mashed together in a really bad way were they just make you cringe. And last the mc is a idiot!!!

6yr
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YuriaLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
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Krad01Lv4

Just up to a few chapters in and i can tell MC is a really f****d up character.How can charisma affect his personality when hes already a grown ass thirty year old man.It's plain COMMON SENSE.He should at least be average in interacting with other people instead of failing miserably.I mean come on the guy should at least know know how to interact with other people in his his previous life or is is there some part in the story that he doesnt talk anyone else until he is transmigratted.I know author is trying to make it as realistic as possible but this is over-realistic. Well at least its good to know that he'll fix later on but this something that doesn't coincide with 'common dollar'

6yr
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Project_TravelerLv14

I need more . Give me more more moooooooorre MoreMORRMOREMORRMORENOMORE............... Gggggggggggiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiivvvvvvvvvvveeeeeerree Mmmmmmeeeeeee mmmmmooooorrrrreeeeee Cccccccccchhhhhhhhaaaaappppppttttteeeeeerrrrr

6yr
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John_JigglerLv3

The mc is stupid as hell. He is gets mad at everyone for a good reason and then crawl back to them with an apology. He can't stick to his decisions. SPOILERS HERE:- He gets angry at his friends (blind faith in the village) hokage(manipulate him, could not control him, expelled him), and then comes back to them begging. He is just like a puppet for his friends. He decided that hidden villages, are not fair to take even malicious missions, so they need to be eradicated. Then he suddenly comes back, say sorry to everyone, gets hitched. He makes Minato come to life, he also betrayed the MC, he just don't care. he got too much power, didn't do anything special, just acts like a lapdog for his friends.

4yr
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big_bad_wolfLv4

I tried to give it a chance but i cant do it .Reading a novel with naruto world as the background you expect an mc who will train hard and have the atitude of a shinobi what you get is a retard that thinks he is playing a game talking and complaining to himself all the time ....

6yr
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wsxdr22Lv11

I found this really fun and interesting story and I'm curious if there's any stories like this. please reply if you do know any. ..............

6yr
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NeedybabyLv6

Love it. Best "original" book I have read. Love how the author explain from all points of view. The mc feels exceptionally real. Mc thoughts are genuine, not mentioning how op and flawed he is at the same time. I have read till 62 chapters and I can say for sure the author has put a lot of effort in writing this story.

6yr
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