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Yuria
YuriaLv56yr
2018-05-02 22:12

I don't like how he reveals his powers (like how he tells his friends or maybe everyone Lol that he has to have missions to lvl up or smthng) and through the reason of having this special 'bloodline'. His system also has counterstops and he doesn't learn anything on his own(like his social skills I mean do u have to upgrade ur social skills every lvl up to improve ur social life? Doesn't conversing to ppl improve ur social skills? Why does he need to upgrade up smthng like that?) He also acts like a child and is kinda immature and makes rash decisions, he also doesn't think first and the consequences of his decisions and just go in first without thinking what would happen to his teammates even though his 30- year's old or smthng and he even has his Int MAX like how can he not think first? Anyway that's all.

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CrimsonDragonKing
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Sir may I remind you that you don't need charisma to consider other's people. It's actually the opposite. The less charisma someone has, the more they tend to consider others because people tend to agree less in contrast if you were to have more charisma where in people tend to agree to you more.

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