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2024-09-09 05:20

The premise is pretty cool, dude is extremely overpowered right from the start but it’s alright since it got nerfed a tiny bit. Personally I just don’t like mc’s that have op powers but didn’t need to work for it at all. What I do like tho is that he is in kumo since that isn’t seen in a lot of fics The grammar and writing is average at best. I think the author forgot how to write the word ‘The’ in every sentence and the flow of the writing just doesn’t feel right. It’s like it was written in a rush and not looked over again after finishing. From the little bit I read the mc is an adult but behaves like a child.. may be because he is in a child’s body but whatever. This is basically just a generic wish fulfillment story

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Thanks for the review.

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