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bladerunner_2049
bladerunner_2049Lv42mth
2024-08-26 15:30

This Author just made Gojo's 'Limitless' full of limits that it is not even a job at this point and he just gives the readers some of the most BS reasons to just support his next level dumb*ss writing, if he want to glaze Itachi that much might as well write a fanfic about him as the MC but nope this Author just wants to use Gojo to get more readers My opinion of this fanfic : Not worth it

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itachi1010
itachi1010Author

In the first chapter I said, MC doesn’t really have the Limitless. What BS limitation are you talking about, when it’s not even the limitless

bladerunner_2049
bladerunner_2049Lv4

oh my bad all I see is u just adding Gojo in the title of the fanfic ,naming the MC after him ,giving him a water down version of limitless with the reason being it is not limitless ( pretty creative reason of u for foreseeing the amountof hate u will get for this) ,giving him six eyes which alone should make MC pretty much a broking existence and while reading this fanfic all I see is Itachi glazing .I might have worded it wrong in my review above but this is my thought

itachi1010:In the first chapter I said, MC doesn’t really have the Limitless. What BS limitation are you talking about, when it’s not even the limitless
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Itachi is MC until MC gets the true infinity, and even after MC gets it. Most of Itachi feats are from the novel, Itachi is more talented because of the wishes, skip to chapter 10 if you want. Mc would have some problems using the limitless right, but that problem wouldn’t last long

bladerunner_2049:oh my bad all I see is u just adding Gojo in the title of the fanfic ,naming the MC after him ,giving him a water down version of limitless with the reason being it is not limitless ( pretty creative reason of u for foreseeing the amountof hate u will get for this) ,giving him six eyes which alone should make MC pretty much a broking existence and while reading this fanfic all I see is Itachi glazing .I might have worded it wrong in my review above but this is my thought
bladerunner_2049
bladerunner_2049Lv4

u should have just write a fanfic about Itachi than just glazing him when there is a person who have six eyes is present ,I am genuinely asking do u know what six eyes can achieve with Chakra which is more versatile and easy to use when compared to cursed energy and u missed to make good first impression which matters

itachi1010:Itachi is MC until MC gets the true infinity, and even after MC gets it. Most of Itachi feats are from the novel, Itachi is more talented because of the wishes, skip to chapter 10 if you want. Mc would have some problems using the limitless right, but that problem wouldn’t last long
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Fr bro you should just stick to making chinese fics all your fics fail because you can't seem to balance or actually finish through its always good first 20 chapters but this one fell after 4 thats saying something.

itachi1010:Itachi is MC until MC gets the true infinity, and even after MC gets it. Most of Itachi feats are from the novel, Itachi is more talented because of the wishes, skip to chapter 10 if you want. Mc would have some problems using the limitless right, but that problem wouldn’t last long
itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Again, your whole problem is that I gave the 10-chapter to Itachi, a warning I gave ahead of time. For that reason, this review brought me zero worth wild information. I knew the first 10 chapters might be a put-off, so I let you know ahead of time, other than you giving me the information I already know and warned you about, what else do you have to offer? You have me 1 star. Was the writing quality that trash? Was my updating stability that trash? Was the Story Deveolment That trash? Was the character Design that trash? Was the world Background that trash?

ACHILLES:Fr bro you should just stick to making chinese fics all your fics fail because you can't seem to balance or actually finish through its always good first 20 chapters but this one fell after 4 thats saying something.
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

your only thing that wasn't particular bad was the updates i will give you that and writing was 3-4 stars at most there were sometimes it'll give a headache and then the rest are just downright awfull like madly so alot of timeskips low to no info background information which we all or most know naruto already so you just have to give an small itteration which you don't and then the development is just timeskips and then glazing itachi even after the 10 chapters which i hate its annoying we don't want to see or hear about itachi and stick away from naruto fics because based on your name it seems you will always just find a way to praise him its annoying

itachi1010:Again, your whole problem is that I gave the 10-chapter to Itachi, a warning I gave ahead of time. For that reason, this review brought me zero worth wild information. I knew the first 10 chapters might be a put-off, so I let you know ahead of time, other than you giving me the information I already know and warned you about, what else do you have to offer? You have me 1 star. Was the writing quality that trash? Was my updating stability that trash? Was the Story Deveolment That trash? Was the character Design that trash? Was the world Background that trash?
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

ch 35 The mc is itachi theres no history itachi would be that op and he gets more op from the wishes???? Drop the fic the fell off is insane and don't write another naruto fic this is worst than boruto and that should say alot

itachi1010:Itachi is MC until MC gets the true infinity, and even after MC gets it. Most of Itachi feats are from the novel, Itachi is more talented because of the wishes, skip to chapter 10 if you want. Mc would have some problems using the limitless right, but that problem wouldn’t last long
Uskalski_Yuchiha
Uskalski_YuchihaLv3

itachi1010:Again, your whole problem is that I gave the 10-chapter to Itachi, a warning I gave ahead of time. For that reason, this review brought me zero worth wild information. I knew the first 10 chapters might be a put-off, so I let you know ahead of time, other than you giving me the information I already know and warned you about, what else do you have to offer? You have me 1 star. Was the writing quality that trash? Was my updating stability that trash? Was the Story Deveolment That trash? Was the character Design that trash? Was the world Background that trash?
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

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Uncle_Groudon
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itachi1010
itachi1010Author

Wow, this was just random. I'm not even mad or upset. you're a joke, thanks for the laugh

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Ole_Tessmann
Ole_TessmannLv4

The story is good. That’s all it is tho. It has its negatives and positives like anything else but the quality of this doesn’t make you have that itch where you want to read more and more. His wishes are explained in ch. 10 for those people that might be confused why he isn’t totally Op. still though the author has his own theories of things and integrates them into the story which may rub some people the wrong way.. for example kust the way his infinity works or how he’s basically not letting ‘gojo‘ acutally utilize his godly chakra control. Some other things don’t make sense either like him and itachi learning seals from kushina to them in a matter of a few paragraphs being able to use flying thunder god. There should be a normal progression of skills, you can’t jump from explaining how kushina can make huge storage seals to them both just having flying thunder god. There are so many sealing jutsu that could be incorporated into their fighting style and since they’ve learnt it they should also use them no? This story would be pretty good for someone who has never watched naruto because even the most basic things are overexplained so the story often times feels lifeless, adding to that is that it seems the author is not a native English speaker so some things sometimes just come out wrong I feel like. Positive things are that the author has a plan in mind for the story and acutally gives explanations to things others would just overlook. I also like that itachi is being brought up as a rival for mc even though it does feel like the author has a hard on for itachi making him even more talented than he originally was… all in all pretty good but not comparable to some of the top tier stories on webnovel

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