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Federico_Medina
Federico_MedinaLv13mth
2024-08-04 08:00

Basura cliché harem porquería 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮 🗑 🚯 🚮

The Alpha in the MCU (old)

Kakarot1809
2.8
21 Chs

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Duke_of_Insanity
Duke_of_InsanityLv13

+1

3mth
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Gunts92
Gunts92Lv10

Précision que l'auteur de cette critique n'as pas lu l'histoire et deteste simplement les harem.

3mth
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Bruh

3mth
Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14

3mth
Other Reviews
Cevahir_Gezer
Cevahir_GezerLv1

It's ridiculous for an alpha with over 1000 pack members to try to find someone like an errand dog. So much wealth, so much servant, political power, influence, military power, James himself is running around like a mercenary looking for stardom. Beta mc search dog mc The character's growth, development, marriage and the wars they experience are skipped. The character is introduced as a side character. There is no character development. There is no world background introduction. Bad writing. Lots of logical errors.

3mth

NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

Don't waste your time... At chapter 1 the Mc is a nobody, at chapter 2 he is the richest and powerful man with 1.000 members on his pack. No development, the author just threw the information on us and we have to accept it 👎

3mth
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

It could be better, to begin with it's not fun to read about a bad-tempered protagonist, I don't want to read a Logan 2.0, so why make a reincarnating protagonist if his personality is similar to the original Logan; second, it is said that his organization works in the shadows but at the beginning of the novel it is said that they do not make an effort to hide, furthermore, it could not be more cliché, a protagonist who does not like to attract attention, this is seen in 90 % of webnovel MCs.

3mth
Lucifer20
Lucifer20Lv4

Reveal spoiler

3mth
Saiv
SaivLv5

I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn

3mth
MIGHTY_ALPIO
MIGHTY_ALPIOLv3

I like it is better than not having any power and always relying on system it's good to new type of Logan who is not doing everything solo instead an organisation money power people it's great

3mth
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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3mth
Justindemigod
JustindemigodLv14

You don't see a lot of Logan fics and this one is pretty good so far.

3mth
Insert_Here
Insert_HereLv13

This is shit I would not wish too happen to my worse enemies [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

2mth
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